In my defense, I think I wrote this when I was 15. (I was a sophomore in high school.) That was about 4-5 years ago, before the concept of "friendly entities" was really a thing. Besides like Berry and Blanche. It could probably benefit from a quality update, however, I'm very busy with school. So that being said, if anyone wants to try their hand at a "rewrite," be my guest.
If anyone does attempt a rewrite in the future, I would just prefer that the backstory and overall concept go unchanged, as it is inspired on personal events.
But thank you for the feedback and the upvote! I am not active here anymore, but you can contact me at karmalgs on Instagram if anyone has questions.