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Thats some really good object you wrote there, I like it, so +1
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Nice, the overconsumption sounds like a terrible situation to be in
+1
There are roads,
a samurai must travel…
This is my favorite object on the site, but I want to say that this page needs a rewrite. Especially on logs. I would actually like to rewrite it, though I don't know.
Just like most other old articles, needs a rewrite.
I know, I can do it.
I agree with you there, although I like the concept
I like the concept, but the SPaG errors, explaining the concept of marshmallows, and length makes me give it a downvote. That's sad because the concept is good. Whether people transform into marshmallow statues or break into hundreds of marshmallows pieces, it's a great idea making them transform people.
I should note that Negative Levels and multiple people in Level 0 are mentioned, despite that not… being right?
My suggestion is that someone fixes the SPaG errors and maybe move it to be Object 5.1 or Object 27.1 (yes there is precedent for sub-Objects, look at Blanche's Gifts), as I think Greasy Marshmallows might be more appreciated there.
If there ever is a rewrite, message me since I am the Object Critic and I have a lot of experience in this area.
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