the writing style left much to be desired, but it isn't downvote worthy. novote.
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(account deleted)This level fascinates me. The writing doesn't really tell what the level is about so I assume it's part of some canon or tale.
I like how different the writing style is. I couldn't really follow much of what was said but I found it to be interesting nonetheless. Experimenting is always fun IMO.
I look forward to more of your writing
It's surely doesn't looks like a normal level format. I like the way its written in second person, talking right to me, that's new to me, different from other articles, but it definitely a good one. anddd i am waiting for the next thing related to this page. Welp looking forward to it = ]
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Im glad you liked it, though i wasnt expecting someone to even shed a tear from reading it.
I liked the content a lot. The athmosphere was interesting. I read it without the music at first, and then without it. The music was quite fitting. However, I don't think this really works as a level. This would be an amazing tale, but while I love format screws, this really doesn't seem to have any reason to be a level. The supposed level 160 isn't described in any way, nothing is mentioned about it, and nothing concrete seems to be implied about it. No-vote, for now. I appreciate the content warning in the beginning, btw.
i'm not sure this works as a level. the ending is a bit rushed too; the manipulation becomes blatant way too quickly in a i-don't-conceive-of-anyone-ever-falling-for-this way.
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