Level 47 - "The Adderwood" / Discussion

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DrChandra 21 Apr 2021 03:01

sees empty slot in the first one hundred levels… is for me?

Sorry about snagging this number. I guess it's just the SCP author in me wanting to grab an old slot when it opens up.

Special thanks to Hollyius, who greenlit this for me. It borrows some concepts from some of my creepypastas as well, so be sure to check out the link to my subreddit in the collapsible if you'd like to see more of the Ophion Occult Order.

The image is sourced under the author collapsible as well, and is from Wikimedia commons.

-1

r a t i f 11 Apr 2023 19:21

This level is a bit outdated, and isn't all that interesting. It's basically just a forest, with no real compelling elements to cause me to be interested in it. Out with the old, in with the new. This could either be rewritten or scrapped to fit wiki standards, imo.

Re: -1

userunhacked 16 Jun 2023 15:14

agreed

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Re: -1

Bufo_Bufo 20 Sep 2023 14:37

True, but it'd be a shame to see it scrapped. Would love to see it updated as it is one of the first levels I read on the site. (also unique snake level haha)

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Mecheye 23 Jul 2023 12:51

Not bad! A few tone issues, but passable

My only gripe is that we really shouldn’t be able to identify the Galaxy as the Milky Way unless the constellations are the same. This level could be in any Galaxy.

+1

msluce09 02 Jul 2024 02:42

The only entry in the wiki to use the term superposition correctly. For this alone, I wish I could give it another +5. Besides superposition, this entry used a variety of scientific terms correctly. Nothing takes me out of a story faster than an author using a scientific term in a way that is so wrong it is almost comical.

Besides physics, I like snakes and I like trees. This level was a complete win as far as I'm concerned.

1:00 am binge-read session

centurys lute 25 Aug 2024 04:09

Ooh, a forest in superposition. I really like the mind-screwy nature of this place, and especially the line:

This means that any campfires or improvised tools and weapons will often (though not always) vanish or revert to an earlier state when direct observation is broken, complicating attempts at survival.

Unfortunately, the idea isn't really explored to its fullest potential. The theme is sidelined in the later paragraphs, and the level ends on a weak note.

Overall, -1

+1

Fartcraft 31 Aug 2024 15:47

Just barelly a + Could be a bit improved because The level itself doesnt sound that intresting But the descreption gives this a +

The level overall 5/10
The Explnation 8/10
This level is outdated tho so i cant say You can try to improve because you Very Likely already have