(TRIMMED) Entity 62 - "Clinker Toys" / Discussion

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Fraud2004 28 Mar 2021 22:44

So this is my first page here, and it's very exciting. I'm sure some of you may have seen this here before but was shortly deleted due to me not really understanding the Greenlight policy. But luckily my draft was reviewed by CutTheBirch and Greenlit via DMs!

Image falls under CC and is able to be used for any purpose.

Unedited image: https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Pipes_in_the_water_treatment_plant_of_an_abandoned_steel_factory_in_Oupeye%2C_Belgium_(DSCF3276).jpg

(Edited image by me)

Crit Post: http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14030608/entity-27-clinker-toys

+1

Some Random User 16 May 2021 12:41

I like how the last log implies that it attacks humans in order to replicate. The experiment logs are neat and overall it feels like the creature is being actively studied. I'd like it if other entities were written this way. Here have my upvote.

Mal0gen 24 Nov 2022 17:07

Not a bad article overall! However, Log 2 has a weird entry at 3:55 (or is it 3:35). Please, rewrite that to

The entity starts melting into a pile of goop

If it's going to die in one or two logs, why bother to write that it is still alive?

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- Mal0gen, the skullgen in your phone.

2:00 am binge-read session

centurys lute 10 Feb 2025 19:00

interesting concept, dull execution.

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