the article premise is really good and those images fucking slap. They're really good, though the wording is very weird in most of the article and it just really doesn't work at all.
"Occasionally, you may find brown stains on the walls, this is because the building is old, and it has started to decay."
"this is because the building is old" just doesn't work at all and is pretty unnecessary anyways, as the image totally conveys that it is very old. I'd probably rewrite it to something like:
"Occasionally, you may find brown stains on the walls, this theorised to be due to the building's age. The building has also started to decay and pieces of the building are overly rusted" but overall this articles premise and the overall of it are still really enjoyable that make it a +1 for me
PS
This line was really good
"Floor =): A party awaits on the other side. But this time, it is safe."