(TRIMMED) Entity 183 - "Carnies" / Discussion

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Habitat and Entity Number

CutTheBirch 27 Nov 2020 19:47

This is a very good article, but don't forget to add the "Habitat" and "Entity Number" parts of the article. These can either be bolded or headers. Look at any other Entity for an example. Also, the title should not be part of the article. Also, also +1.

Last edited on 27 Nov 2020 19:47 by CutTheBirch Show more

yoyoflux 30 Nov 2020 00:52

without needing to read, I see multiple problems already making this worthy of my downvote, which is why I downvoted.

• habitat listing
• Entity number
• you listed the title twice

should you have gotten any form of crit, this would've had these. furthermore, acknowledging the fact that you likely got no crit, I see no need to read further

-1

Its a genuinely good article

SquibbleZombie 27 Jan 2025 12:59

The Article is great with a unique Entity and no SPaG errors that I could see. Everything made since and it was a very good Entity. Just read it before you literally judge an article on its title.

SlavPlagueDoc 19 Apr 2021 17:53

Interesting ideas. Other than the few mistakes previously noted by the last commenters, this article is original. I like the ideas.

+1

twos-hellscape 13 May 2021 15:53

i dont know why these are so terrifying as an idea to me

+1

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+1 in 2025

SquibbleZombie 27 Jan 2025 13:01

This is interesting and makes sense. It contains no SPaG errors that I could find. I enjoyed reading the concept and I could absolutely see Carnies as a threat.

This is a really good Entity Article and is underrated.

2:00 am binge-read session

centurys lute 11 Mar 2025 17:51

interesting concept bogged down by 2020 nothingburger execution.

-1