Level 444 - "The Level Without Form" / Discussion

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TheBoxOfFun 21 Nov 2020 20:15

My second entry ever posted on the wiki, thanks to all the people who critted me.

Image sources:

• hallway was taken from Math Science Building Hallway, by Mbrickn on Wikimedia Commons

If you notice any kind of error, feel free to tell me, so I can improve it.

Last edited on 16 May 2022 11:57 by TheBoxOfFun Show more

had86 22 Nov 2020 01:05

Hi! I upvoted this level since I really like the idea, but certain sentences could be fixed. Could I alter some of the wording so it sounds smoother? I wouldn't change anything. If you don't want me to, I totally understand, but I could still point out specific examples.

TheBoxOfFun 22 Nov 2020 08:05

Hey, of course you can fix the text, there's no problem for me.

Last edited on 22 Nov 2020 08:07 by TheBoxOfFun Show more

had86 23 Nov 2020 03:34

Alright, I went ahead and fixed up some stuff! I hope I did a nice job.

Zanilo 25 Apr 2022 15:47

Upvoted the level! Its pretty good! I think it embodies what the backrooms really are. From the strangeness to the horror.

Just something, the man described pretty well a videogame for someone from 1988 haha

TheBoxOfFun 14 May 2022 07:19

Thank you for enjoying this level, I really appreciate it, I'm feeling satisfied with this one tbh.

Also… damn, you're right, I made a big mistake there haha!

(P.S: Sorry for the late response ^^')

Robert Goerman 14 Jun 2022 19:28

TheBoxOfFun

"… Three mirrors from Level 365, the bottom and middle parts of two of them were missing from the glass, and the third one was completely devoid of it. The anomalous properties of the mirrors weren't recorded …"

Thank you for making my vision a part of yours.

Hope the "Sightless Seers" don't visit Level 444.

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Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman

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ForestIsWatching 09 Jul 2022 14:50

I really enjoyed reading this.

+1, good job.

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Please mind the Forest.

1:00 am binge-read session

centurys lute 31 Jan 2025 19:11

interesting concept bogged down by 2020 nothingburger execution.

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