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I have downvoted this article because I feel offended by Being told that I am "an entity".
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(account deleted)I second this. How dare you compare us to those… things.
I second second this, we are NOT Entities, and this is 2020.
lmao
what if the entity was the friends we made along the way?
oh fuk thats deep
- random bitch on wikidot
Sorry for being late, the point of the article was to show the Entities point of view and how we should not be in The Backrooms. This is not intended to make you an entity, but to show you that we are the "entities" for the actual entities.
Heyo! I'm going through every Entity in the list and reviewing each one in order, then leaving reasons as to why. Here's my review of this one!
Thoughts: I really like how poetic this is. It has this feel of "we have no chance, but we don't mean to be that way." I like how this is written, it feels like a piece of poetry. I love how nice this is overall. The concept is kind of strange, but the execution could not have been done better.
Result: +1
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This was just a twenty-five minutes draft, please stop this, it was bait
heh
I'm justice!…What?…No not the blind folded girl!
I do really like the implication that we are infact the Enigmatic Entities for this universe. It really makes us feel much more powerful in this world that fucking kicks our ass. the sheer existence of us being on the list for enigmatic entities gives me alot to think. The article itself is really poetic and really focus's that we are the anomaly here not them.
I am not a fan of this article. My main problem is with the way it is written, but the concept also is kinda eh.
there is no human equal to another, therefore putting a physical description is impossible.
this is stupid. Yes, no too humans look like each other perfectly, but all humans look like..humans. Shocking I know.
Its not like some humans have 4 arms or 65 eyeballs or have feathers. There is still a blanket description that can fit all humans. Its not like we can't describe what certain animals look like because they may look different from one another. That would be kinda stupid.
However, why are we Entity 1?,
question marks act like a period. Placing a comma after one like this makes no grammatical sense.
this should not be So.
the so should not be capaltilized. also, the so really doesn't need to be in this sentence. It only serves to make it more confusing.
We are an "anomaly" so to speak, an error that, like a snowball rolling down a hill, has been growing, and we are more and more here, if we were not here, the entities would not be aggressive nor would we have to see them.
too long with too many commas. could easily be broken up into something better like
We are an "anomaly, an error that, like a snowball rolling down a hill, has been growing. If we had never grown in the first place, we would never have seen these entities, and they would not be aggressive.
each thing we see and / or learn here,
should be And/or. There shouldn't be a space.
From our point of view, we didn't discover it until the creation of this file.
this makes no sense. How have we not discovered humans until the creation of this file? Even in the context of this file, this is a confusing remark.
They know what we are capable of, how far we can go.
there should be an and after the comma
Lose Hope
Why is this bolded?
On to concept stuff
The concept is fine I guess, it is a little cliche, which I dislike a bit.
I cannot count how many times people talk about humans in terms of being invasive or some other type of environmental message related to humanity.
I don't think this article really treads any new ground, and because of how much I hear this concept repeated, it feels like a drag on the article as a whole.
Because of this and the SPaG/Writing quality, along with the fact it feels very short and it has an overdone concept, this article is a downvote for me.
That gave me goosebumps for some reason, it reminds me of beta and Blanche who believe in the wanderes
I'm justice!…What?…No not the blind folded girl!
Why are we always the plague? Even in reality we just destroy things and make other, this page has more literal truth than what it's allowed to have
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