Would it be possible to pacify a single Skin-Stealer by trapping it in a small space with a Skin-Giver? Or would they eventually start fighting?
Overall I like this entity, especially the description of how it pulls off one’s skin with suckers! However wouldn’t language be a GOOD way of identifying a skin stealer since they do not understand it?
I do think the motto
"Blood runs red, they're not dead. Blood runs clear, steer clear".
Needs work as it doesn’t have a good of rhythm and also rhymes “clear” with “clear”
maybe instead it could be "Blood runs clear, they can't stay here"
"Don't trust anyone who barely speaks"
Well i guess i'm fucked aren't i? I doubt it'd be too talkative even in a situation like this, so i'd probably become a walking red flag for everyone.
solution: knife. someone questions your humanity, prick yourself to show that you're an actual wanderer and then accuse them of being a skin-stealer
I like the new motto
I'm justice!…What?…No not the blind folded girl!
I like this entity. I´m excited how the rewrite will improve it
interesting concept, dull execution.
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