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I once read a post by Bart0nius a year ago that said that he didn't like the idea of level 9 so he tried to re-do levels 8 and 9. That is what the dream part about Bart0nius is about.
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This article is pretty good, one of my favourites so far. I do have a few criticisms though.
The items that require a power source are unfunctional due to the missing requirement of a power source.
This is a little wordy/redundant, perhaps you could simply say that the homes are unpowered
Another anomalous property of this Level is that you can find two houses weirdly clipped inside of each other when travelling too far, which is physically impossible.
I think the fact that two houses are merged together speaks for itself! I also don't think you need to say "another anomalous property is". In my opinion, this sounds unorganized. It should be clear to the reader that we're essentially describing anomalous properties of the level.
The wet asphalt roads are unpainted, and are covered with leaves in some areas. The puddles in some spots of the roads indicates that the Level had once rained before. The stone sidewalks are normal, and don't seem to have any anomalous oddities.
I really love the characterization of this place as apparently having weather, but also having no direct evidence of that! All the leaves and puddles suggest there was a storm, but does it ever actually storm while someone is there? Maybe you could elaborate on this. How do these streets smell I wonder?
The stone sidewalks are normal, and don't seem to have any anomalous oddities
Once again, I think this is a bit redundant, but I think it's interesting that the sidewalks are stone. Maybe you could simply say the sidewalks are made of stone (what kind?), but do not seem anomalous.
I know this probably seems like a lot of criticism, but I do like your article :)
5/10
No clue what this is even about.
idea: 9/10
execution: 1/10
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It captures exactly what the backrooms are. This nostalgic feeling most levels in the backrooms have is the strongest here. +1
Definitely, a product of its time.
It is oddly written, the part with the Reddit-User was odd and it was very boring.
-1'd.
When I was a little kid, I had a nightmare about an infinite suburb, I couldn't go home and I got lost. The dream ended when a car pulled up next to me. I don't know if the car was gonna pick me up or if they shot me or something, but the car was terrifying to me for some reason.
"This concludes our danse macabre. If you haven't been murdered, I can only say, better luck next time. If you have been, goodnight, wherever you are."
so basically 9.1 AND crimson forest got removed and it caught me off guard cause they just went poof one day
and i dont wanna fuck with nobody articles no more cause i still feel stupid for the 'level 6 situation', so just making a comment and asking who gonna remove 9.1 for the exit list?
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