V cool, would visit.
It's like… a decent idea I guess…
It doesn't really do anything. It's just a plastic moon model inside of a room. Nothing more nothing less. The writing isn't good and nothing else in the page makes up for it.
Eh. Not sure what exactly wrong with it, but I don't like it. Novote.
From Pyro AroAce, that one trans guy.
I don't think this counts as malicious voting either, though please inform me if it does.
From Pyro AroAce, that one trans guy.
interesting premise, but clinical tone just makes it too boring. also really short
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Lemme just start off by saying how much I love this idea. The thought of being in a large desolate wasteland, which is actually neither large nor desolate, is fun to think about. Really don't know how to explain it, but this is the perfect sort of "background level" not super quirky or unique. Its nature is unique enough that it doesn't need a format screw to become loveable.
Now here's the toughie. This level is static. There is no room to grow. The way this is written makes me feel as if this couldn't be expanded in any way. Not saying it's impossible, of course. It just would be difficult. It's too precise, too concrete. What is written here is all there is (with the exception of big man Beauford). So much about the level is left to default expectations. For example, the atmosphere; is it similar to the Earth's atmosphere? Why don't the lead fumes make the level naturally uninhabitable? Is the gravity radial, or is it vertical?
But, of course, none of these things are necessary. This level stands strong without expansion, and the concept is absolutely golden. Just a little fleshing out would make this so much better. I never would have thought of anything remotely close to this. This level has real potential to be something iconic instead of simply memorable.
+1
~Robert~
I wish someone made this longer. It seems like a good idea, but it just seems a bit short. I mean, it would be cooler if more interesting facts and things would be applied to this, though.
@pearbranch14823
this level definitely needs a rewrite.
-The infamous radioactive piece of bread.
wonderful concept, but there isn't much here in terms of execution.
-1