Help: Draft Critique
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Required reading before making a request for feedback on a Sandbox post. Includes template for posts.
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A short place for non-Greenlighter critiquers to introduce themselves.
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A LEVEL THAT TAKES PLACE INSIDE A SHIP, SUBMERGED BY WATER WITH ANOMALOUS PROPERTIES
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A POI from the Followers of Jerry.
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by: 02 Nov 2025 19:57 |
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*sung to the tune of Without Me by Eminem*
Guess who’s back
And is dead
From writing
This level
nananana
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Oh god I think I'm finally done.
Entity name: Beetles
Tags: Entity, Hivemind, Aggressive, Explosive, Insectoid
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Uptown are the neighborhood areas of American cities. This is meant to be a sub-level of Level 11, and who knows what secrets it beholds...
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A "return" of the Smiling Room… requires a greenlight.
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by: 26 Aug 2025 13:16 |
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SURVIVAL DIFFICULTY:4，have
Entity 2 - "The Windows"，Entity 3 - "Smiler"，Entity 67 - "Partygoers =)"。
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by: 22 Aug 2025 13:11 |
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This is redundant, please delete it
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Okay so its actually more like a 3 month WIP with a 3 year break, but finished nonetheless, seeking critique (Entity, Insectioid, Hivemind, Agressive)
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by: 15 Aug 2025 16:10 |
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The source and embodiment of order.
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