The Backrooms

A short place for non-Greenlighter critiquers to introduce themselves.

I'm not actually seeking a greenlight right this second, but I would like someone to critique this article, set for DuelCon2025 on the Despair team. What did I do wrong? What can I add? What typos did I make? Would this be okay to put on the site? See for yourself by clicking the link to my level, looking through the page inside of that link, and typing your thoughts on your very own reply. It's very appreciative if you do.

Hello, fellow wanderers and greenlighters! I'm back after 10-11 months of silence with a level that touches on a different concept of horror: a boringly long pathway with only curiosity being the main driving point. It's supposed to be a very meaningful level about the rancid demands of "what lies at the end of the road" and how it deteriorates our own state of mind. If this sounds too generic for you, then I'm sorry in advance. Just see the level for yourself and critique/greenlight it when you're ready. What did I do wrong? What can I add? What typos did I make? Would this be okay to put on the site? See for yourself by clicking the link to my level, looking through the page inside of that link, and typing your thoughts on your very own reply. It's very appreciative if you do.

Magical Theme level. I have now changed the article.

An Abandoned Office?..

Seemingly-endless vehicular cabins

This my first article, i need to get least 3 critique.

Two rooms connected by a narrow tunnel, but when you close your eyes you end up elsewhere…

My first article! Would like critique on it