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This is a joke level I made I’m gonna link the Sandbox link down below
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by: 28 Jul 2021 17:59 |
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The third chapter of the series. Please critique.
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by: 23 Jun 2021 22:55 |
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by 23 Jul 2021 23:40 Jump! |
I just wanted some proper feedback about this level.
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by: 22 Jul 2021 19:33 |
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by: 22 Jul 2021 14:11 |
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I put a long time of work and thought Into this. I had a somewhat hard time finding some feedback but I did receive some. I think maybe I'll have a better chance here. I'm new to this so if this isn't how to do this quite let me know. I grapple the concept for a while and I think I almost got it. http://backrooms-sandbox.wikidot.com/mr-heart-fungus
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by: 20 Jun 2021 01:44 |
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by 22 Jul 2021 05:42 Jump! |
This is a entity which will trade with you. You may get lucky. You may not. If you aggravate it. Well... say goodbye to yourself or cluster 1.
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by: 30 Jun 2021 12:31 |
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by 22 Jul 2021 04:59 Jump! |
A level idea about an empty void that slowly makes you go insane, and, the first level in Cluster II, connecting to Level 999.
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by: 19 Mar 2021 01:56 |
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by 19 Jul 2021 16:42 Jump! |
This is the first level draft I created, and the whole idea is these weird catacombs. The caskets are forbidden. Don't touch the caskets. You think you can hear voices. Is it real? Who was on that radio? Sometimes it's lit, sometimes it's not. There's a strange cult that say they offer "protection"...but what kind of protection? Let me leave. Oh God, let me leave.
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by: 07 Jul 2021 12:55 |
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by 19 Jul 2021 05:24 Jump! |
I am working on a backrooms draft for three different level ideas. I will link to my sandbox where I will be posting all three.
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by: 19 Jul 2021 05:19 |
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by: 13 Jul 2021 18:44 |
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Attempting to go for a unique take on the standard entity. All I can say is that Tchaikovsky would like it.
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by: 03 Jul 2021 11:25 |
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I have not checked for plagurizm or spelling errors,
if you have any critisim; i would like to hear it.
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by: 01 Jul 2021 16:02 |
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A draft critique for a level I am attempting to write. This is my first Level attempt. Thank you for your time.
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by: 27 Jun 2021 05:06 |
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by ![]() 28 Jun 2021 00:26 Jump! |
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by: 27 Jun 2021 19:07 |
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I put a lot of time into this level and had basically poured most of my ideas for the Backrooms into this level. I feel like it is a very creative mix of all the Backrooms levels and contains interesting aspects. I would like this article to be green-lighted.
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by: 27 Jun 2021 02:51 |
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by 27 Jun 2021 17:07 Jump! |
long level with multiple areas
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by: 25 Jun 2021 23:21 |
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I explored the idea on what happens when a religious delusional man enters the Backrooms. Inspired mostly by Don Quixote, although not very similar.
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by: 25 Jun 2021 21:25 |
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I put a long time of work and thought Into this. I had a somewhat hard time finding some feedback but I did receive some. I think maybe I'll have a better chance here. I'm new to this so if this isn't how to do this quite let me know. I grapple the concept for a while and I think I almost got it. http://backrooms-sandbox.wikidot.com/mr-heart-fungus
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by: 19 Jun 2021 20:06 |
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Proposed object 52
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by: 05 Jun 2021 23:12 |
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by 09 Jun 2021 16:38 Jump! |
might as well attempt the forums!
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by: 03 Jun 2021 00:37 |
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by 03 Jun 2021 01:56 Jump! |