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This is a joke level I made I’m gonna link the Sandbox link down below
by: Kate6969Kate6969
28 Jul 2021 17:59
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The third chapter of the series. Please critique.
by: Paint PalettePaint Palette
23 Jun 2021 22:55
2 by Paint PalettePaint Palette
23 Jul 2021 23:40 Jump!
I just wanted some proper feedback about this level.
by: IronDiamondIronDiamond
22 Jul 2021 19:33
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by: pollespolles
22 Jul 2021 14:11
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I put a long time of work and thought Into this. I had a somewhat hard time finding some feedback but I did receive some. I think maybe I'll have a better chance here. I'm new to this so if this isn't how to do this quite let me know. I grapple the concept for a while and I think I almost got it. http://backrooms-sandbox.wikidot.com/mr-heart-fungus
by: Mr heart fungusMr heart fungus
20 Jun 2021 01:44
2 by Kate6969Kate6969
22 Jul 2021 05:42 Jump!
This is a entity which will trade with you. You may get lucky. You may not. If you aggravate it. Well... say goodbye to yourself or cluster 1.
by: Omega2070Omega2070
30 Jun 2021 12:31
3 by Kate6969Kate6969
22 Jul 2021 04:59 Jump!
A level idea about an empty void that slowly makes you go insane, and, the first level in Cluster II, connecting to Level 999.
by: GeniusAnderID25S03GeniusAnderID25S03
19 Mar 2021 01:56
8 by Epicgamer23Epicgamer23
19 Jul 2021 16:42 Jump!
This is the first level draft I created, and the whole idea is these weird catacombs. The caskets are forbidden. Don't touch the caskets. You think you can hear voices. Is it real? Who was on that radio? Sometimes it's lit, sometimes it's not. There's a strange cult that say they offer "protection"...but what kind of protection? Let me leave. Oh God, let me leave.
by: AlkrolydAlkrolyd
07 Jul 2021 12:55
2 by Epicgamer23Epicgamer23
19 Jul 2021 05:24 Jump!
I am working on a backrooms draft for three different level ideas. I will link to my sandbox where I will be posting all three.
by: Epicgamer23Epicgamer23
19 Jul 2021 05:19
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by: BrokenRubixxBrokenRubixx
13 Jul 2021 18:44
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Attempting to go for a unique take on the standard entity. All I can say is that Tchaikovsky would like it.
by: onion_man_onion_man_
03 Jul 2021 11:25
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I have not checked for plagurizm or spelling errors, if you have any critisim; i would like to hear it.
by: reasercher murphyreasercher murphy
01 Jul 2021 16:02
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A draft critique for a level I am attempting to write. This is my first Level attempt. Thank you for your time.
by: OhOkIGuessOhOkIGuess
27 Jun 2021 05:06
4 by (account deleted)
28 Jun 2021 00:26 Jump!
by: OhOkIGuessOhOkIGuess
27 Jun 2021 19:07
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I put a lot of time into this level and had basically poured most of my ideas for the Backrooms into this level. I feel like it is a very creative mix of all the Backrooms levels and contains interesting aspects. I would like this article to be green-lighted.
by: AnarchistZAnarchistZ
27 Jun 2021 02:51
3 by AnarchistZAnarchistZ
27 Jun 2021 17:07 Jump!
long level with multiple areas
by: CandyContainmentCandyContainment
25 Jun 2021 23:21
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I explored the idea on what happens when a religious delusional man enters the Backrooms. Inspired mostly by Don Quixote, although not very similar.
by: dtondton
25 Jun 2021 21:25
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I put a long time of work and thought Into this. I had a somewhat hard time finding some feedback but I did receive some. I think maybe I'll have a better chance here. I'm new to this so if this isn't how to do this quite let me know. I grapple the concept for a while and I think I almost got it. http://backrooms-sandbox.wikidot.com/mr-heart-fungus
by: Mr heart fungusMr heart fungus
19 Jun 2021 20:06
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Proposed object 52
by: Agent HammerheadAgent Hammerhead
05 Jun 2021 23:12
2 by CandyContainmentCandyContainment
09 Jun 2021 16:38 Jump!
might as well attempt the forums!
by: i like computeri like computer
03 Jun 2021 00:37
5 by i like computeri like computer
03 Jun 2021 01:56 Jump!
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