Help: Draft Critique
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i need critize and greenlight
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by:  (account deleted) 28 Oct 2021 02:49 |
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by 04 Nov 2021 02:36 Jump! |
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Something small that will turn into big
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by: (account deleted) 03 Nov 2021 17:03 |
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Wanna know if anybody likes the idea.
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by: (account deleted) 03 Nov 2021 13:30 |
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If you stumble across a red bar in the streets of Level 11, be prepared to grow. A lot.
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by: 27 Oct 2021 19:54 |
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Level 969 - The Three Realities
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by: 30 Oct 2021 05:13 |
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by 01 Nov 2021 16:09 Jump! |
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A cave system that changes the further a wanderer goes in
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by: 31 Oct 2021 04:01 |
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First article! Don’t have too high expectations but please do tell what I did right/wrong, and hey if it’s good enough please give a greenlight!
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by: 30 Oct 2021 17:41 |
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Snails that bind to a wanderer, which will kill them if the snail dies.
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by: 26 Oct 2021 16:04 |
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by 29 Oct 2021 20:46 Jump! |
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just what the title says
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by: 28 Oct 2021 16:47 |
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My first time writing so I don’t expect much but please let me know what I did good and/or wrong, and hey if it’s good enough please leave a green light.
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by: 28 Oct 2021 08:37 |
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by 28 Oct 2021 11:22 Jump! |
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My first ever sandbox creation, hope you like it! :)
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by: 17 Sep 2021 23:16 |
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by 26 Oct 2021 16:26 Jump! |
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Basically, incredibly strong glass bottles that could also warn you after certain entities.
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by: 21 Oct 2021 21:37 |
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by 26 Oct 2021 16:13 Jump! |
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Written as a sequel type of thing to Object 38
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by: 23 Oct 2021 05:07 |
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by 26 Oct 2021 00:05 Jump! |
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by: 22 Oct 2021 05:22 |
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by 22 Oct 2021 05:59 Jump! |
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Please I need HARD critique for my spookycontest2021 entry. A candy-based object on level 9
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by: 21 Oct 2021 22:43 |
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a new terrifying entity I've created. warning that the image I created also unsettles me too.
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by: 21 Oct 2021 00:11 |
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Fourth part of a series. Needs a green light.
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by: 28 Sep 2021 14:39 |
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by 20 Oct 2021 18:02 Jump! |
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Approval needed
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by: 19 Oct 2021 04:53 |
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by 20 Oct 2021 04:15 Jump! |
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I have not tried writing anything for a very long time, and I still need to know what can I remove and/or focus more on.
But anyway, it is an idea for a grim reaper like entity for when some wanderer's die, by supposedly bringing them to his level.
A semi-benevolent entity that claims to care for the dead.
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by: 19 Oct 2021 16:59 |
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An idea for a habitable room within Level 43: Water World.
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by: 19 Oct 2021 16:23 |
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