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Level 783 is an empty and infinite field, except for a forest in the middle, upon entering the forest the wanderer is teleported to a place that can be extremely dangerous, or a random level of the backrooms that is not really a level of the backrooms, a place which is a continuation of another place from level 783, a habitable place like a forest on fire and which has a village with a super tech tower, and after entering a specific area of ​​any of these areas of the level, you are taken from back to the field from the beginning, and repeat the same process of entering the forest and going to one of these places, and there are no records of exits that when leaving you don't have to die
by: boa noite eu esperoboa noite eu espero
14 Mar 2022 16:27
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A bit dangerous and a bit nostalgic.
by: RosaliaXDRosaliaXD
14 Mar 2022 15:43
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Its a room called bunker town
by: Crabs the Tubular Crabs the Tubular
12 Mar 2022 03:11
3 by Crabs the Tubular Crabs the Tubular
14 Mar 2022 14:49 Jump!
by: YourWeirdPlantYourWeirdPlant
14 Mar 2022 13:18
4 by TrailmixNCocoaTrailmixNCocoa
14 Mar 2022 14:21 Jump!
Level !, Also Known As Level Run For Your Life, Is One Of The Most Dangerous Enigmatic Levels In The Backrooms And The Most Entity-Infested Level. It's One Of The Levels You Can't Stay At Due To The Amounts Of Entities Chasing You.
by: Kyrenzane10Kyrenzane10
12 Mar 2022 20:08
2 by YourWeirdPlantYourWeirdPlant
14 Mar 2022 13:13 Jump!
If it's good, maybe a possible greenlight too?
by: Malkovon512Malkovon512
13 Mar 2022 05:48
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Critique or Greenlight
by: ZaniloZanilo
07 Mar 2022 04:23
3 by ZaniloZanilo
13 Mar 2022 04:40 Jump!
Level 148 is a vast coniferous forest that stretches out for miles on end. The forest contains a central winding road through the middle and various meandering rivers, pristine lakes and streams.
by: Edward188Edward188
12 Mar 2022 15:50
2 by Edward188Edward188
12 Mar 2022 19:03 Jump!
Level 540 is a library that you get teleported to. You watch your entire life on water that resembles a screen and are unaware it's you, since you forget your entire life when you enter. People do not seem to age in this level, and it smells somewhat like pine trees.
by: 584tritype584tritype
12 Mar 2022 16:52
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by: sTo1111sTo1111
11 Mar 2022 16:57
3 by sTo1111sTo1111
12 Mar 2022 02:57 Jump!
by: Kyrenzane10Kyrenzane10
12 Mar 2022 02:02
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Hello, I wrote this level, just looking for some critique for the level or maybe greenlight. I looked through it a double checked if it made sense or not, hope you like it.
by: IlluminiIllumini
10 Mar 2022 01:19
14 by IlluminiIllumini
11 Mar 2022 20:12 Jump!
i made a level ,sorry if its boring, its my first time making a level :) (made some edits to itz0
by: frynleelasscenemogffrynleelasscenemogf
10 Mar 2022 20:03
4 by frynleelasscenemogffrynleelasscenemogf
11 Mar 2022 18:07 Jump!
looking for crit or a greenlight
by: Rainy32Rainy32
08 Mar 2022 08:51
4 by Rainy32Rainy32
11 Mar 2022 10:16 Jump!
A joke level, and yes, as the name suggests, it’s a Rickroll.
by: YourWeirdPlantYourWeirdPlant
03 Mar 2022 18:42
6 by NavyEOD_24NavyEOD_24
09 Mar 2022 20:23 Jump!
If you want to
by: Unity-xkUnity-xk
28 Feb 2022 16:12
5 by frynleelasscenemogffrynleelasscenemogf
09 Mar 2022 16:36 Jump!
I just need someone to critique mine or even greenlight mine (i doubt that will happen tho)
by: Jacknation Jacknation
09 Mar 2022 16:28
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A rural home with a lot more within it than meets the eye.
by: saciachridsaciachrid
20 Jan 2022 01:00
3 by NavyEOD_24NavyEOD_24
08 Mar 2022 22:13 Jump!
This is my first thing I have done on this site
by: Christopher StewartChristopher Stewart
08 Mar 2022 14:16
2 by NavyEOD_24NavyEOD_24
08 Mar 2022 18:07 Jump!
I would Like to post A level Called Death Kitchen Ive Been Dreaming Of seeing it on this site Thanks
by: AnthonyD AnthonyD
06 Jan 2021 02:52
21 by ZaniloZanilo
08 Mar 2022 03:11 Jump!
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