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DrKimoto Sandbox Approval	by: DrKimoto 23 Oct 2024 06:19	3	by DrKimoto 25 Oct 2024 06:12 Jump!
Level 307 - Chroma Contraption (NEED GREENLIGHT)	by: 49Man 02 Oct 2024 06:10	6	by 49Man 25 Oct 2024 04:29 Jump!
LaserTag: I make the new backrooms level. it needs a work though.	by: custom mashup 13 Oct 2024 18:36	3	by custom mashup 19 Oct 2024 20:55 Jump!
Come Critique the_shadow_spiral! My first submission is an unnumbered Level. Immortal Victorian explorer faces the dark spiral of grief.	by: AtomMudman 02 Oct 2024 17:43	5	by AtomMudman 15 Oct 2024 15:43 Jump!
any critique, I know this is the second time but wait. also help me if you can	by: henry_the_bacon_man 03 Oct 2024 13:27	2	by henry_the_bacon_man 03 Oct 2024 13:29 Jump!
requesting any critique or maybe a rewrite if you can help	by: henry_the_bacon_man 02 Oct 2024 13:24	1
Requesting Critique for Level 382 - Buried Hotel It's basically a hotel thats buried in bedrock and has some irradiated areas	by: FrostyMint 06 Sep 2024 16:50	3	by endless_waters 01 Oct 2024 23:30 Jump!
WANT MORE DRAFT REVIEWS? Check out our Discord. However, here are some tips to make your draft more attractive.	by: ShroomDispencer 31 Mar 2020 15:38	7	by BlueSignet 30 Sep 2024 23:59 Jump!
Level 85: "The Dust Storm" (Looking for Criticism and Greenlights) Level 85 is an infinite city surrounded by a thick layer of orange dust, where sandstorms occur frequently. Level 85 was discovered by a group of explorers when they accidentally found a door leading to this level at Level 99.	by: Dang Nguyen 01 Jul 2024 02:58	4	by AtomMudman 29 Sep 2024 17:23 Jump!
New renovated Suburban town The Backrooms Remodeling Co has made a new level called level 310	by: Skatrs 13 Sep 2024 19:20	2	by MisterNemu 22 Sep 2024 20:01 Jump!
requesting critique for level: 539 "the campsites" pretty much a deserted front rooms campground that is in good condition with weird stuff with time	by: Bridger A Walker 09 Sep 2024 23:35	2	by custom mashup 15 Sep 2024 19:36 Jump!
I am looking for a green light!	by: Jessie_0 22 Aug 2024 05:58	8	by Jessie_0 12 Sep 2024 07:13 Jump!
Something for Roots2024 that I forgot to post;;	by: Pearbranch 08 Sep 2024 15:21	3	by Pearbranch 10 Sep 2024 14:18 Jump!
Level 4.5 - "Within the Walls"	by: SigmaShield 26 Aug 2024 14:35	3	by SigmaShield 31 Aug 2024 17:49 Jump!
Looking for the greenlit. [Level 549 "The Neon City"] (New User, idk)	by: Ursername_Brazilian 07 Jul 2024 20:53	4	by KAMAMO 13 Aug 2024 04:41 Jump!
Requesting Critique and/or Greenlight For Level 927 An extremely liminal airport level where the day/night determines the danger, along with some other interesting concepts and lore.	by: Squigglezfr 07 Aug 2024 00:33	4	by Squigglezfr 12 Aug 2024 20:42 Jump!
My first contribution	by: XanderSPrime 17 Jul 2024 21:46	3	by Skatrs 10 Aug 2024 16:11 Jump!
Level 6.6/Lights on (I’m looking for critique but a greenlight would be nice as well) Lights on is the complete opposite as lights out if you couldn’t tell from the name.	by: Coolkin70 16 Jul 2024 17:15	7	by Joe Biden Skibidi 09 Aug 2024 20:19 Jump!
Looking for Critiques: My Level 85 (297) Draft	by: KAMAMO 06 Aug 2024 04:18	3	by KAMAMO 08 Aug 2024 09:21 Jump!
Trying to get a greenlight for level 531	by: Skatrs 04 Aug 2024 13:58	1

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