Help: Draft Critique
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by: 02 Dec 2025 12:31 |
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*sung to the tune of Without Me by Eminem*
Guess who’s back
And is dead
From writing
This level
nananana
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by: 09 Oct 2025 15:37 |
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A POI from the Followers of Jerry.
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by: 02 Nov 2025 19:57 |
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A "return" of the Smiling Room… requires a greenlight.
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by: 26 Aug 2025 13:16 |
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Oh god I think I'm finally done.
Entity name: Beetles
Tags: Entity, Hivemind, Aggressive, Explosive, Insectoid
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by: 29 Sep 2025 16:37 |
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by: 26 Sep 2025 15:11 |
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by: 08 Sep 2025 16:47 |
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by: 07 Sep 2025 05:41 |
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by: 06 Sep 2025 22:07 |
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Uptown are the neighborhood areas of American cities. This is meant to be a sub-level of Level 11, and who knows what secrets it beholds...
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by: 01 Sep 2025 02:12 |
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SURVIVAL DIFFICULTY:4,have
Entity 2 - "The Windows",Entity 3 - "Smiler",Entity 67 - "Partygoers =)"。
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by: 22 Aug 2025 13:11 |
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Okay so its actually more like a 3 month WIP with a 3 year break, but finished nonetheless, seeking critique (Entity, Insectioid, Hivemind, Agressive)
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by: 15 Aug 2025 16:10 |
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The source and embodiment of order.
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by: 11 Aug 2025 16:38 |
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The Level 973 is an infinite amalgam of residential rooms with an exotic (to say the least) interior layout filled with oddities that, in the eyes of the Backrooms, are nothing.
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by: 20 Jul 2025 18:36 |
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The first page in an original canon I’m working on called the Entity Epidemic Canon
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by: 15 Jul 2025 07:13 |
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by: 08 Jul 2025 12:01 |
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I'm not actually seeking a greenlight right this second, but I would like someone to critique this article, set for DuelCon2025 on the Despair team. What did I do wrong? What can I add? What typos did I make? Would this be okay to put on the site? See for yourself by clicking the link to my level, looking through the page inside of that link, and typing your thoughts on your very own reply. It's very appreciative if you do.
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by: 01 Jul 2025 16:26 |
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Magical Theme level. I have now changed the article.
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by: 18 May 2025 17:33 |
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Hello, fellow wanderers and greenlighters! I'm back after 10-11 months of silence with a level that touches on a different concept of horror: a boringly long pathway with only curiosity being the main driving point. It's supposed to be a very meaningful level about the rancid demands of "what lies at the end of the road" and how it deteriorates our own state of mind. If this sounds too generic for you, then I'm sorry in advance. Just see the level for yourself and critique/greenlight it when you're ready.
What did I do wrong? What can I add? What typos did I make? Would this be okay to put on the site? See for yourself by clicking the link to my level, looking through the page inside of that link, and typing your thoughts on your very own reply. It's very appreciative if you do.
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by: 09 Jun 2025 04:11 |
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