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by: neptunium153neptunium153
02 Dec 2025 12:31
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*sung to the tune of Without Me by Eminem* Guess who’s back And is dead From writing This level nananana
by: EX_xuEX_xu
09 Oct 2025 15:37
9 by EX_xuEX_xu
05 Nov 2025 08:32 Jump!
A POI from the Followers of Jerry.
by: Lady CognitiaLady Cognitia
02 Nov 2025 19:57
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A "return" of the Smiling Room… requires a greenlight.
by: Kyrenzane10Kyrenzane10
26 Aug 2025 13:16
3 by Kyrenzane10Kyrenzane10
02 Oct 2025 13:00 Jump!
Oh god I think I'm finally done. Entity name: Beetles Tags: Entity, Hivemind, Aggressive, Explosive, Insectoid
by: -Th-orium-Th-orium
29 Sep 2025 16:37
2 by -Th-orium-Th-orium
29 Sep 2025 16:40 Jump!
by: DuskkitteDuskkitte
26 Sep 2025 15:11
2 by DuskkitteDuskkitte
26 Sep 2025 15:15 Jump!
by: MertydawsMertydaws
08 Sep 2025 16:47
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by: PurplekiddoPurplekiddo
07 Sep 2025 05:41
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by: PurplekiddoPurplekiddo
06 Sep 2025 22:07
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Uptown are the neighborhood areas of American cities. This is meant to be a sub-level of Level 11, and who knows what secrets it beholds...
by: LegendaryLarnLegendaryLarn
01 Sep 2025 02:12
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SURVIVAL DIFFICULTY:4,have Entity 2 - "The Windows",Entity 3 - "Smiler",Entity 67 - "Partygoers =)"。
by: glaassglaass
22 Aug 2025 13:11
6 by glaassglaass
29 Aug 2025 09:43 Jump!
Okay so its actually more like a 3 month WIP with a 3 year break, but finished nonetheless, seeking critique (Entity, Insectioid, Hivemind, Agressive)
by: -Th-orium-Th-orium
15 Aug 2025 16:10
5 by -Th-orium-Th-orium
18 Aug 2025 18:10 Jump!
The source and embodiment of order.
by: sultannosultanno
11 Aug 2025 16:38
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The Level 973 is an infinite amalgam of residential rooms with an exotic (to say the least) interior layout filled with oddities that, in the eyes of the Backrooms, are nothing.
by: Juliano 35Juliano 35
20 Jul 2025 18:36
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The first page in an original canon I’m working on called the Entity Epidemic Canon
by: YabberJabberYabberJabber
15 Jul 2025 07:13
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by: YabberJabberYabberJabber
08 Jul 2025 12:01
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I'm not actually seeking a greenlight right this second, but I would like someone to critique this article, set for DuelCon2025 on the Despair team. What did I do wrong? What can I add? What typos did I make? Would this be okay to put on the site? See for yourself by clicking the link to my level, looking through the page inside of that link, and typing your thoughts on your very own reply. It's very appreciative if you do.
by: Kyrenzane10Kyrenzane10
01 Jul 2025 16:26
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Magical Theme level. I have now changed the article.
by: custom mashupcustom mashup
18 May 2025 17:33
4 by SanarusGreydaSanarusGreyda
30 Jun 2025 11:56 Jump!
Hello, fellow wanderers and greenlighters! I'm back after 10-11 months of silence with a level that touches on a different concept of horror: a boringly long pathway with only curiosity being the main driving point. It's supposed to be a very meaningful level about the rancid demands of "what lies at the end of the road" and how it deteriorates our own state of mind. If this sounds too generic for you, then I'm sorry in advance. Just see the level for yourself and critique/greenlight it when you're ready. What did I do wrong? What can I add? What typos did I make? Would this be okay to put on the site? See for yourself by clicking the link to my level, looking through the page inside of that link, and typing your thoughts on your very own reply. It's very appreciative if you do.
by: Kyrenzane10Kyrenzane10
09 Jun 2025 04:11
4 by Kyrenzane10Kyrenzane10
15 Jun 2025 07:59 Jump!
by: IsaacIsaIsaacIsa
14 Jun 2025 14:34
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