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A short place for non-Greenlighter critiquers to introduce themselves.
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Required reading before making a request for feedback on a Sandbox post. Includes template for posts.
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by: 13 Jan 2025 08:59 |
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Hello, fellow wanderers and greenlighters! I'm back after 10-11 months of silence with a level that touches on a different concept of horror: a boringly long pathway with only curiosity being the main driving point. It's supposed to be a very meaningful level about the rancid demands of "what lies at the end of the road" and how it deteriorates our own state of mind. If this sounds too generic for you, then I'm sorry in advance. Just see the level for yourself and critique/greenlight it when you're ready.
What did I do wrong? What can I add? What typos did I make? Would this be okay to put on the site? See for yourself by clicking the link to my level, looking through the page inside of that link, and typing your thoughts on your very own reply. It's very appreciative if you do.
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by: 09 Jun 2025 04:11 |
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by: 09 Jun 2025 08:55 |
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Magical Theme level
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by: 18 May 2025 17:33 |
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by: 29 May 2025 11:40 |
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by: 17 Nov 2024 09:30 |
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I've finished writing a entity known as "the takers" and it's now ready for critique!
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by: 03 Jan 2023 05:09 |
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Level 131 is a farm level, but different from others that were created before, it has a sentient entity and farm-themed activities, but with interesting twists. I hope you enjoy it.
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by: 09 Jun 2024 16:31 |
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This my first article, i need to get least 3 critique.
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by: 12 Apr 2025 17:10 |
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An Abandoned Office?..
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by: 09 May 2025 22:34 |
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by: 10 May 2025 09:37 |
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Seemingly-endless vehicular cabins
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by: 21 Apr 2025 01:04 |
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by: 21 Apr 2025 00:34 |
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by: 18 Apr 2025 11:57 |
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I need greenlight abd criticsm.
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by: 04 Jul 2024 09:53 |
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by: 02 Apr 2025 12:51 |
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by 12 Apr 2025 08:38 Jump! |
Two rooms connected by a narrow tunnel, but when you close your eyes you end up elsewhere…
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by: 31 Mar 2025 10:17 |
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