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A short place for non-Greenlighter critiquers to introduce themselves.
by: BlueSignetBlueSignet
31 Oct 2023 00:15
16 by SanarusGreydaSanarusGreyda
31 May 2025 14:49 Jump!
Required reading before making a request for feedback on a Sandbox post. Includes template for posts.
by: LiurniaLiurnia
13 Jan 2025 08:59
2 by LiurniaLiurnia
06 Feb 2025 03:30 Jump!
Hello, fellow wanderers and greenlighters! I'm back after 10-11 months of silence with a level that touches on a different concept of horror: a boringly long pathway with only curiosity being the main driving point. It's supposed to be a very meaningful level about the rancid demands of "what lies at the end of the road" and how it deteriorates our own state of mind. If this sounds too generic for you, then I'm sorry in advance. Just see the level for yourself and critique/greenlight it when you're ready. What did I do wrong? What can I add? What typos did I make? Would this be okay to put on the site? See for yourself by clicking the link to my level, looking through the page inside of that link, and typing your thoughts on your very own reply. It's very appreciative if you do.
by: Kyrenzane10Kyrenzane10
09 Jun 2025 04:11
4 by Kyrenzane10Kyrenzane10
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by: IsaacIsaIsaacIsa
14 Jun 2025 14:34
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by: Jessie_0Jessie_0
09 Jun 2025 08:55
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Magical Theme level
by: custom mashupcustom mashup
18 May 2025 17:33
3 by custom mashupcustom mashup
31 May 2025 19:19 Jump!
by: custom mashupcustom mashup
30 May 2025 20:18
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by: SanarusGreydaSanarusGreyda
29 May 2025 11:40
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by: custom mashupcustom mashup
17 Nov 2024 09:30
3 by custom mashupcustom mashup
18 May 2025 13:16 Jump!
I've finished writing a entity known as "the takers" and it's now ready for critique!
by: TheGameMaster222TheGameMaster222
03 Jan 2023 05:09
5 by LiurniaLiurnia
10 May 2025 10:03 Jump!
Level 131 is a farm level, but different from others that were created before, it has a sentient entity and farm-themed activities, but with interesting twists. I hope you enjoy it.
by: GenoFanGenoFan
09 Jun 2024 16:31
6 by LiurniaLiurnia
10 May 2025 10:02 Jump!
This my first article, i need to get least 3 critique.
by: The_FailThe_Fail
12 Apr 2025 17:10
2 by LiurniaLiurnia
10 May 2025 10:01 Jump!
An Abandoned Office?..
by: Hex111Hex111
09 May 2025 22:34
2 by LiurniaLiurnia
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by: Hh1Hh1
10 May 2025 09:37
2 by LiurniaLiurnia
10 May 2025 10:00 Jump!
Seemingly-endless vehicular cabins
by: TheBearcrowaveTheBearcrowave
21 Apr 2025 01:04
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by: whambammerwhambammer
21 Apr 2025 00:34
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by: TheBearcrowaveTheBearcrowave
18 Apr 2025 11:57
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I need greenlight abd criticsm.
by: The_FailThe_Fail
04 Jul 2024 09:53
5 by The_FailThe_Fail
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by: PanWeiLunPanWeiLun
02 Apr 2025 12:51
3 by PanWeiLunPanWeiLun
12 Apr 2025 08:38 Jump!
Two rooms connected by a narrow tunnel, but when you close your eyes you end up elsewhere…
by: Gen_isisGen_isis
31 Mar 2025 10:17
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