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by: BlueSignetBlueSignet
17 May 2024 02:46
2 by LiurniaLiurnia
12 Jan 2025 11:16 Jump!
Required reading before making a request for conceptual feedback. Includes template for posts.
by: LiurniaLiurnia
12 Jan 2025 10:46
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"You can't hold us here for long..."
by: YabberJabberYabberJabber
08 Jul 2025 12:09
6 by SunnyDKnightSunnyDKnight
22 Nov 2025 06:08 Jump!
I need critique for my idea.
by: Dr SventzerDr Sventzer
21 Jul 2024 17:44
7 by YabberJabberYabberJabber
08 Jul 2025 09:28 Jump!
Hi! This is my first attempt at writing a backrooms level. I am only somewhat aware of the lore, so do say if I've added anything that is non-lore compliant. I also am yet to find a suitable image, if you have any recommendations, please say. Thank you for reading!
by: Malignant_MosquitoMalignant_Mosquito
03 Apr 2025 17:32
3 by YabberJabberYabberJabber
08 Jul 2025 09:25 Jump!
by: TheMaskManTheMaskMan
07 Jul 2025 22:17
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by: PanWeiLunPanWeiLun
15 May 2025 08:22
2 by SanarusGreydaSanarusGreyda
14 Jun 2025 07:52 Jump!
by: doubleaureliandoubleaurelian
20 Apr 2025 00:02
2 by HxkyHxky
23 Apr 2025 13:05 Jump!
My first article.
by: The_Faillen_OneThe_Faillen_One
12 Apr 2025 15:20
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First entity post i guess
by: Kitachi4MoonKitachi4Moon
06 Sep 2022 04:13
4 by Kitachi4MoonKitachi4Moon
19 Mar 2025 17:45 Jump!
Definately needs more thought, but I'd like critique on the core idea in and of itself.
by: SomeDumbNerdSomeDumbNerd
13 Mar 2025 23:00
3 by SomeDumbNerdSomeDumbNerd
15 Mar 2025 00:56 Jump!
I've been on the discord looking for critiques, and now I'm here looking for some critiques as well. (Open post for link.)
by: doubleaureliandoubleaurelian
05 Mar 2025 23:31
2 by LiurniaLiurnia
05 Mar 2025 23:34 Jump!
Just an idea
by: SseevenSseeven
22 Feb 2025 20:41
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by: stiltsonpsychostiltsonpsycho
02 Dec 2024 22:43
3 by stiltsonpsychostiltsonpsycho
04 Dec 2024 00:25 Jump!
A sublayer slightly inspired from Egyptian burial complexes, a perfect fit for level 46's deserted environment.
by: A Dream BusA Dream Bus
11 Jul 2024 10:29
2 by Spectre48Spectre48
03 Nov 2024 00:58 Jump!
A level that plays on the strange effect of covering everything in carpeting
by: endless_watersendless_waters
17 Sep 2024 01:38
2 by Spectre48Spectre48
02 Nov 2024 01:43 Jump!
A Norwegian styled house surrounded by an infinite landscape of snow and rock, the main aspect of this level focuses on the paint and the effects it has on the wanderers.
by: LeBakonLeBakon
14 Sep 2024 18:17
2 by Spectre48Spectre48
02 Nov 2024 01:35 Jump!
by: AveryQuaintAveryQuaint
24 Oct 2024 23:12
2 by Spectre48Spectre48
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by: 49Man49Man
29 Sep 2024 00:08
3 by 49Man49Man
02 Oct 2024 06:09 Jump!
A vast network of claustrophobic tunnels partially flooded in a murky water. Plays on ‘submechanophobia’, the fear of submerged man-made objects.
by: The_C1rcusClownThe_C1rcusClown
28 Sep 2024 01:17
5 by endless_watersendless_waters
01 Oct 2024 22:37 Jump!
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