Comments for page "Level 102 - "Kanashimi""

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Mon, 09 Mar 2026 03:13:43 +0000

this moved me

Confused

Sat, 13 Dec 2025 14:38:34 +0000

So, wait, what is this level actually about beyond grief? It feels more like a phenomenon to me, but I could be misunderstanding it, but it just doesn't feel like a level, maybe I just don't get poetry or something

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Fri, 21 Nov 2025 05:30:47 +0000

Very nice poetry! Also love how all of it, even if metaphorically, paints the picture of an actual level that goes through the five stages of grief.

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Sun, 05 Oct 2025 13:24:19 +0000

I realized halfway through that this was actually a series of haikus, not just free verse, and my brow got all scrunched with how impressed I was. The production of this could not have remotely been easy, given the massive constraints of English haikus, and as such I think it tells enough of a compelling story and gives enough unique, vivid imagery for me to really feel comfortable with a +1.

Re: -1

Sun, 05 Oct 2025 13:21:32 +0000

who are you to insinuate that DrAkimoto doesn't know their own writing skill and talent? you can say that you don't like his poetry, and that's fine, but saying that you've seen his writing and that he should have done more on something he's making, not you feels arrogant.

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Thu, 14 Aug 2025 20:56:16 +0000

I'm not a fan of the poetry levels. I've seen how you do writing on other levels. Please give us something more than just a poem for this level. Prose does not do your writing justice and doesn't work for wanderer reports…

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Fri, 09 May 2025 20:24:03 +0000

I'm afraid it's peak, so glad I got to crit this

+1 from Goerman

Fri, 09 May 2025 15:47:14 +0000

We are all so lucky to engage with talent such as this. Seriously.

The review NateDaGreat would never do.

Thu, 08 May 2025 18:39:34 +0000

Really cool poetry. I like the images you made for it/used. It has this unique vibe that I got from once playing LSD Dream emulator. Every single way is different from another. We as humans chose our paths in life but they are allways influenced by someone or something.

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Thu, 08 May 2025 16:50:51 +0000

Honestly some of the better poetry I've seen on here so far.

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Thu, 08 May 2025 16:42:59 +0000

AH THE TRYPOPHOBIA IMAGE

+1

Thu, 08 May 2025 16:42:22 +0000

great poetry

Peak Fiction honestly

Thu, 08 May 2025 16:40:13 +0000

Why did you say this would be downvoted into oblivion?
This is great.
+1 Because we need more actually good poetry.

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Thu, 08 May 2025 16:32:37 +0000

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