Comments for page "Level 708 - "The Day Never Came""

I was waiting for this very long time and you delivered.

Tue, 15 Apr 2025 07:33:07 +0000

Like is some high tier liminality understanding and I love it. The way you tell every sentence is beautiful!

+1

Hope you receive 70 upvotes.

Mon, 14 Apr 2025 23:16:02 +0000

_{For all of the obvious reasons.}

hold up.. her prose is this elegant?

Mon, 14 Apr 2025 17:58:57 +0000

idk what to say except i just. really love this. the descriptions are beautiful and the page feels like a real breath of life

Novote

Mon, 14 Apr 2025 05:32:41 +0000

The physical narration is amazing don't get me wrong. But I don't really see any level aspect of this—I do see bittersweet , it does well. I hate saying "this isn't backrooms enough" because usually, that's some bullshit, but I think here is where I'd say something adjacentish? If this wasn't listed as a level, I would think this is a tale or something. Not because of the format screw, but rather the nature of the article.

There are levels that are inspired from the real world, but there's elements that show the fantastical nature of it. Or play into it in some sort of way. I didn't see as much of that here to engage me with this entry.

The actual writing is great! Good enough to not outright downvote. But I didn't feel the level aspect as much so novote (I hope this doesn't feel petty ;w;)

Author Post

Mon, 14 Apr 2025 05:20:27 +0000

A collection of short, liminal scenarios.

Originally written in the spring of 2023, and after much deliberation, brought to you as a proper Backrooms level. A huge shoutout to ReyDay for clearing. Special thanks to akarine147, BlueSignet, DivineAtlas, PinDead, and Lambda Core for critting my silly stream of consciousness.

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