Comments for page "Headlights" http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16610499/headlights Posts in the discussion thread "Headlights" Sun, 06 Sep 2026 00:40:34 +0000 http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16610499#post-6354614 Re: Novote for now http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16610499/headlights#post-6354614 Sun, 07 Jan 2024 06:05:21 +0000 Iamalemon 7491662 I'd be interested to hear if you have any other specific ideas of what to fix! Thx for the input.

Also for "the creature behind me" yea idrk what to say abt that. There is a creature. It is behind them. :3

]]> http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16610499#post-6354584 Novote for now http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16610499/headlights#post-6354584 Sun, 07 Jan 2024 05:55:12 +0000 Spectre48 6247398 I really enjoyed the storytelling and atmosphere for the first 6/10 of the tale. After that, it just felt a little bit silly to me, with the lines like "the creature behind me," and the ending. There were a couple spag errors as well, but I think with a few touch ups this could be a very solid tale.

]]> http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16610499#post-6349225 The jumpscare ending http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16610499/headlights#post-6349225 Sat, 06 Jan 2024 03:22:09 +0000 DivineAtlas 8037742 HEADLIGHTS at the end reminds me of title cards from the game Control.

]]> http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16610499#post-6346580 Vehicular manslaughter is effective http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16610499/headlights#post-6346580 Fri, 05 Jan 2024 15:05:25 +0000 Red-eyes Dragoon 7184922 :3 +1

]]> http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16610499#post-6346267 Re: Good, +1. http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16610499/headlights#post-6346267 Fri, 05 Jan 2024 13:50:19 +0000 Iamalemon 7491662 I was surprised that I didn't get any snipes. Thx!!

]]> http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16610499#post-6346236 Good, +1. http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-16610499/headlights#post-6346236 Fri, 05 Jan 2024 13:40:10 +0000 Error012 8765439 Honestly, I saw the bottom of the article and it reminded me of the bottom of one of my joke articles. It was good, +1 clearly.

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