Comments for page "Entity 150 - “The Stalkers”"

2:00 am binge-read session

Mon, 10 Mar 2025 20:49:20 +0000

creepy concept bogged down by some areas with fluff.

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Thu, 23 Nov 2023 19:18:36 +0000

So what happens if you shoot a stalker with a rifle or launch 1kg of a shaped charged firesalt bomb at it?

Do they have terminator levels of strength and durability or something?

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Fri, 17 Nov 2023 20:02:07 +0000

Thank you 🗿

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Fri, 17 Nov 2023 19:19:28 +0000

mms yes ver good

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Fri, 17 Nov 2023 11:59:12 +0000

Woah thanks! Never thought I’d write an article that gets to be someone’s favorite 😅. Big thanks for the upvote and the support!

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Fri, 17 Nov 2023 08:06:26 +0000

Now this is a cool asf entity. Stalking is incredibly creepy to me and that's why this concept really intrigues me. Might be one of my favourites! +1

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Thu, 16 Nov 2023 22:44:17 +0000

Thanks for the upvote!

And yeah, I try my best to credit everyone who critiqued. In my eyes, they basically co-wrote the article so they deserve as much credit as can be given lol.

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Thu, 16 Nov 2023 21:04:11 +0000

Overall I love the concept and it’s excellent execution!! Easy +1

Thanks for the mention btw!!

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Thu, 16 Nov 2023 19:00:23 +0000

Thanks! By the way, the notes when you open the thingy we’re supposed to simulate that, like someone being worried about a follower. And the very first log was also meant to convey about the same thing. I probably didn’t deliver it well but hopefully it did it’s job 😅

Thanks again for the clearing and the upvote!

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Thu, 16 Nov 2023 18:46:59 +0000

Overall, it's quite enjoyable. You put a lot of work into it, and I can tell. I would have liked to see maybe a log of someone freaking out over something following them, but overall, the page works.