Comments for page "Level 402 - "Plastic City""

1:00 am binge-read session

Tue, 28 Jan 2025 21:28:31 +0000

interesting concept, dull execution.

-1

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Sat, 18 Nov 2023 17:27:05 +0000

At first I thought that this was going to completely break the logic of the Backrooms by giving people infinite food and a literal Jesus medicine, but then I got to the Discovery section and something… clicked. You managed to subvert my expectations pretty damn hard right there.

It lures you in with the promise of infinite food and a literal cure-all, but stay too long there and you'll never want to leave, nor could you. A Level pretending to be a normal town, but it's just too perfect. It feels… uncanny. Unsettling. It feels liminal, but in the way that mannequins feel liminal.

Great job, you just gave me a new favorite Level (and maybe a couple nightmares, too). Well done, +1.

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Wed, 08 Nov 2023 13:16:08 +0000

They sorta just look like whatever the thing was before it was plastified but now plastic. So it's possible one of the statues looked like that.

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Thu, 26 Oct 2023 22:21:48 +0000

Am I correct?

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Wed, 25 Oct 2023 13:01:13 +0000

Whilst most of the buildings have completely empty rooms, and some buildings contain a staggering amount of detail, looking more akin to buildings found in the Frontrooms; these buildings can be found listed below.

This is really strangely worded. You should really break this up and it will look a lot better.
You also repeat words several times.
A lot of your wording is confusing in the logs and journals. I would suggest rereading everything you have written.
You also connect your article to M.E.G.

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Wed, 25 Oct 2023 11:52:44 +0000

Yeah you can edit any page if that's for correcting grammar mistakes (unless they are clearly intentional or something)

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Tue, 24 Oct 2023 22:15:56 +0000

By the way, don't forget to set your parent page as the contest.
Edit: Would you be fine if I go and edit the SPaG errors?

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Tue, 24 Oct 2023 22:06:40 +0000

Well, I was trying to take the guess on what the plastic statues look like

+1, well done mystery there

Tue, 24 Oct 2023 10:24:57 +0000

The level and its narrative are consistent with itself, with all elements having a utility, like the two mentions of a police station that might at first sound useless but are actually part of the building-up to the mystery. Most elements also do make sense (like the reason why Miracle Serum isn't seen everywhere in the Backrooms despite its utility), and the building up to the explanation is well done, as we get the clues one by one, completing the previous ones. And even with the explanation, we still don't get everything. What's the source of it? Is it the level? Or something in the clock tower? You reveal just enough for us to get into the mystery. There is just some weird sentences sometimes, but not enough to be complained about. Great job!

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Tue, 24 Oct 2023 09:18:16 +0000

Is this a reference to something?

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Tue, 24 Oct 2023 06:24:28 +0000

Let me take a guess about what the plastic statues look like, they are normal colored (if the hair is color yellow, then the hair remains white) but the bodies, clothes, and hair are made out of shiny plastic, and the eyes are white with no irises and no pupils

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Mon, 23 Oct 2023 23:20:04 +0000

I love how this turned out in the end. Uses a lot of elements found in older articles in an interesting way and some nice impending doom horror

Great Entry!

Mon, 23 Oct 2023 17:59:08 +0000

A perfect blend of that classic linear horror with some good old mystery and story. +1!

Re: sniped :3 (amendment)

Mon, 23 Oct 2023 17:16:14 +0000

Actually, there are some SPaG errors that I noticed.
So, you were right. It's just not where you thought, apparently.
I just did a quick skim of the article (and I'm quite busy), so I'm not going to point out where they are(although I could go right back to the article and find them, since I remember where they were located).
My apologies that I can't help at the moment. Maybe I'll visit this tonight once I finish homework.

Re: sniped :3 (amendment)

Mon, 23 Oct 2023 17:04:03 +0000

After re-reading the article, I realized that I had misread a few sentences, so in reality, there are none that I can spot.

Oops.

Re: sniped :3

Mon, 23 Oct 2023 14:47:11 +0000

Thanks for reading!

I'm glad you liked the Level at least and I'm sorry for the SPaG errors. May I ask what ya found so I can fix them real quick?

sniped :3

Mon, 23 Oct 2023 14:35:43 +0000

Not a bad level, just very occasional SPaG errors, but they're barely noticeable. A decent contender for Classicon.