Comments for page "Level 60 - "The Baywalk""

Re: 1:00 am binge-read session

Thu, 05 Feb 2026 14:58:24 +0000

perfectionist much? lol one day ill find an article you +1. :>

No vote

Mon, 01 Sep 2025 09:51:20 +0000

This level does feel quite liminal and the photos certainly add to it, and painless death is quite a unique concept. However, the group "the Brave" is not nearly as fleshed out as I think they should be.

Given the only confirmed way of exiting level is by jumping into ocean to go to Level 7 and this method of exiting has a high chance of killing you, this level is pretty much inescapable. It should have been highlighted how the members of the Brave are not voluntarily living there; they are stuck there.

"They are friendly and open to trading". Who are they trading with? Anyone who ends up on this level is trapped there. Forget trading. Simply joining the Brave would be a better option.

+1

Thu, 23 Jan 2025 21:22:50 +0000

Bit confused visualizing this in my head which really adds to it. How high up is the water level exactly that people are able to jump from the pier into it and still swim to the beach for safety? How can people properly inhabit the lower half without getting constantly flooded? They'd be targeted by smilers since they'd be down there during the low tide, but people escape to safety?

1:00 am binge-read session

Tue, 03 Sep 2024 22:15:53 +0000

i love the liminal photos and the idea of the sea taking on different forms, but did you really have to go from "phenomenon painless death" to:

He is a highly-skilled martial arts player, which came into large use when he was the first one to discover the level itself.

[…] there appears to be an unknown phenomenon that affects many wanderers by making them feel "relaxed" and "calm" despite the fact that there are hordes of Smilers lurking everywhere.

Curing the effect is still varied; but the most common way is to slap the victim.

it creates some serious tonal whiplash.

-1

(no title)

Tue, 25 Jul 2023 03:30:35 +0000

I like the idea of this one. It’s quite threatening and rather spooky

However the portion about the founder of the level and his martial arts skills with his 9 uniquely skilled companions felt a bit forced and unnecessary, and distracted from the narrative.

Re: novote

Sat, 08 Jul 2023 23:48:53 +0000

when this was being checked by a gl (nate) and other critics, i wasn't informed before with these current SPaG issues, and i myself was like worse than now LMAOAOAOAOA so i won't blame anyone, and i won't edit the page anymore since i've already stopped with these

but in my own mindset, what matters is the concept

novote

Fri, 16 Jun 2023 15:35:14 +0000

a long time ago i upvoted this. now im starting to notice the spag and its sort of bothering me. the concept is awesome tho, and youve put a ton of effort into this, which kept me from the downvote

Re: -1

Fri, 21 Apr 2023 07:11:46 +0000

this level isn't that very scary-looking if you've been in the community for so long, i myself even feel that

(i can't believe you -1 #sosad)

-1

Tue, 11 Apr 2023 22:52:55 +0000

A long time ago, as evident in my previous comment, I critiqued this article. My main issue with it nowadays is its strange tone and poor vocabulary, which make the page a little hard to read through and take seriously.

+1

Thu, 02 Mar 2023 08:36:24 +0000

Good article that kept my interest in every moment. Nothing more to say.

Re: +1

Sat, 25 Feb 2023 00:43:08 +0000

ay thanks!

+1

Fri, 24 Feb 2023 21:26:44 +0000

I liked how at the end of the description of characteristics of "the sea" your username is being used.

Very good article.
+1

Re: +1

Tue, 10 Jan 2023 15:53:06 +0000

if you walk, 10 smilers appear and begin saying swear words………..

Re: +1

Mon, 21 Nov 2022 06:32:02 +0000

ultra creepy bay WLakk !

+1

Tue, 15 Nov 2022 08:21:28 +0000

baewalk

Re: +1

Tue, 13 Sep 2022 00:51:09 +0000

ay thanks for the support given! stay tuned for more!

Re: Nice

Tue, 13 Sep 2022 00:50:48 +0000

ay thanks! stay tuned for more works!

+1

Mon, 12 Sep 2022 13:57:44 +0000

Well written. I have nothing more to say.

Nice

Mon, 12 Sep 2022 13:44:06 +0000

Really good level and idea!

Very poggers, +1

Re: +1 from Goerman

Tue, 06 Sep 2022 03:58:03 +0000

Approved! DM me on Discord - D34TH#0001

ay thanks for the support given! i'll be posting a new level soon! stay tuned!

+1 from Goerman

Mon, 05 Sep 2022 23:31:27 +0000

D34TH_0000,

I really enjoyed this and the effort you put into it is quite obvious!

Wish that I could give you +2.

I might want to implement my Object 365 - "Seer Tea" as a possible "antidote" to "Painless Death," if you approve.

Anyways, thank you for this enjoyable read.

Re: Rat.

Wed, 10 Aug 2022 05:17:41 +0000

my student grew so fast

Rat.

Wed, 10 Aug 2022 05:16:47 +0000

This was the first article i critiqued. This is what started the quest. The trek. The venture. The journey. The road to GL.

a

Sat, 30 Jul 2022 07:12:41 +0000

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Re: Good Article

Sat, 30 Jul 2022 07:11:20 +0000

Will do! <33

Re: !!

Fri, 29 Jul 2022 23:28:24 +0000

I appreciate that.

Good Article

Fri, 29 Jul 2022 12:49:41 +0000

Keep doing it my friend.

!!

Fri, 29 Jul 2022 01:05:24 +0000

I definitely agree! yes, you're way beyond correct. You're definitely one of the best commentator of this comment section! I'm way honored for you to be here, reading my article!

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(no title)

Thu, 28 Jul 2022 21:46:31 +0000

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Re: Wait a minute

Wed, 27 Jul 2022 23:28:57 +0000

I have no idea

anyways hopefully you enjoyed reading!

Re: +1

Wed, 27 Jul 2022 23:27:42 +0000

Its thanks to all of you who supported/criticized this article :yeah:

ay thanks epic! looking forward to your recent sandbox!

Wait a minute

Wed, 27 Jul 2022 16:54:57 +0000

Darkness?
Is this a rain world reference?

+1

Wed, 27 Jul 2022 15:21:58 +0000

I'm impressed by how much you improved this article since your first draft! Solid +1, good article.

Re: +1

Wed, 27 Jul 2022 13:30:53 +0000

Stay tuned for the next works! :eyes: literally planning to connect this level to my new one, which should be more interesting if I pull it off!

Ay thanks for reading, have a good one!

+1

Wed, 27 Jul 2022 12:44:29 +0000

Very enjoyable, Im not usually a fan of reading levels but this one was nice

That formatting was 😩👌

Re: ...

Wed, 27 Jul 2022 11:19:58 +0000

ay thanks! i didnt advertise this thing so, thats probably the reason why there were no votes, but anyways thanks for reading!

...

Wed, 27 Jul 2022 09:45:31 +0000

No votes in an hour or hours? I just voted and I am currently the only one who voted.

You have made a good job, and your level is not bad!