Comments for page "Level 458 - "Papa Pedro's Pizza Palace of Pleasantries""

1:00 am binge-read session

Fri, 31 Jan 2025 19:38:24 +0000

interesting concept bogged down by 2020 nothingburger execution.

-1

Conceptual Issues at the start

Tue, 06 Sep 2022 07:27:21 +0000

ay! I'd like to inform you that this page suffers from major conceptual issues actually, there are some parts in which you introduce something, but you've barely explained it deep enough for it to have a purpose in the article. an example of this is the security cameras, which were just slapped in between without extra information :sob:

this page also suffers from rapidly switching focus, this is noticeable especially in the part where you explain about the looping around the hallways

hoping for this article to receive a rewrite though! there is potential if done right!

The entities are smooky

Wed, 22 Jun 2022 15:14:59 +0000

I enjoyed the level part of it and it was enjoyable, but those entities scare me alot for some reason (in a good way). +1

Re: No vote

Wed, 22 Jun 2022 11:48:11 +0000

Oops,sorry I accidentally click the downvote botton

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Sat, 18 Jun 2022 14:16:26 +0000

Indeed.

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Sat, 18 Jun 2022 12:11:36 +0000

thepizzaisaggressive.mov

Re: No vote

Sat, 18 Jun 2022 06:57:34 +0000

You said no vote but you downvoted it?

Also, I disagree a bit. The entities section may have some wacky concepts, but it is contrasted very well with the technical writing.

Along with that, the concepts have some horrifying implications. Sure it's pizza, but it makes sense with the level's theme.

my name!

Fri, 17 Jun 2022 17:22:00 +0000

my name is pedro

No vote

Thu, 16 Jun 2022 23:29:24 +0000

I liked the first part of the level but the entity section is so goofy .More like a joke level for me.

haha funny +1

Thu, 16 Jun 2022 08:03:39 +0000

haha funny feddyfazbear level

Re: +1

Thu, 16 Jun 2022 01:47:22 +0000

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=czTksCF6X8Y

+1

Wed, 15 Jun 2022 22:41:38 +0000

Funny pizza go brr

Re: Damn

Wed, 15 Jun 2022 20:48:05 +0000

guess it'll be eating you instead

Re: Finally! A restroom! Didn't think I would make it.

Wed, 15 Jun 2022 20:36:08 +0000

no problemo

Finally! A restroom! Didn't think I would make it.

Wed, 15 Jun 2022 20:32:30 +0000

Finally!

A restroom!

At my age, one should not venture too far from restrooms.

And…there are restrooms without mirrors! The whole mirror thing is different since Level 365. Especially mirrors with reflections that act independently.

This article was a pleasant read. Thank you.

Damn

Wed, 15 Jun 2022 20:18:43 +0000

Was planning on eating pizza today

+1 haha sniped

Wed, 15 Jun 2022 20:11:45 +0000

Great article! Really glad to see this finally out. Enjoyed doing the crit(s) as well. This article took a while to come out, but I'm very glad it finally did.