Backrooms level 114 critque, or greenlight http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14550282/backrooms-level-114-critque-or-greenlight Posts in the discussion thread "Backrooms level 114 critque, or greenlight" - Trying to make level 114 and hopefully get it uploaded to the wikidot Sun, 12 Jul 2026 17:44:02 +0000 http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14550282#post-5225462 Re: Backrooms level 114 critque, or greenlight http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14550282/backrooms-level-114-critque-or-greenlight#post-5225462 Mon, 07 Mar 2022 08:57:13 +0000 Kailen 7440127 The reasoning for the reading area's being completely different is because I couldn't find an image of a dark reading area, if I find one i'll change it

]]> http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14550282#post-5225110 Re: Backrooms level 114 critque, or greenlight http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14550282/backrooms-level-114-critque-or-greenlight#post-5225110 Sun, 06 Mar 2022 16:45:44 +0000 Zanilo 7117511 I can get at least the atmosphere you have here and I like it, despite the reading rooms being completely different from the rest of the level. But the text looks like a lot of topics squeezed into a paragraph.

]]> http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14550282#post-5223680 Re: Backrooms level 114 critque, or greenlight http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14550282/backrooms-level-114-critque-or-greenlight#post-5223680 Fri, 04 Mar 2022 23:29:54 +0000 Kailen 7440127 Ok i'll get mt friend working on that since we agreed I would write it all out and come up with the idea's he would make it sound better and do that grammar

]]> http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14550282#post-5223560 Re: Backrooms level 114 critque, or greenlight http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14550282/backrooms-level-114-critque-or-greenlight#post-5223560 Fri, 04 Mar 2022 17:16:01 +0000 NavyEOD_24 2945263 This… really needs work. I couldn't read through it all because I was just lost with what I was reading. There are far too many commas, no establishment of tone, poor writing quality, and just an overall lack of polishing.

This needs to be proof-read by someone before being considered for greenlighting.

]]> http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14550282#post-5223292 Backrooms level 114 critque, or greenlight http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14550282/backrooms-level-114-critque-or-greenlight#post-5223292 Fri, 04 Mar 2022 11:07:43 +0000 Kailen 7440127 http://backrooms-sandbox-2.wikidot.com/kailen-2

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