Level critics http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14540453/level-critics Posts in the discussion thread "Level critics" - I'd like to know how I can improve my level further down the line. Mon, 09 Mar 2026 09:21:15 +0000 http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14540453#post-5219250 Re: Level critics http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14540453/level-critics#post-5219250 Sun, 27 Feb 2022 01:12:44 +0000 NavyEOD_24 2945263 - There's a lot of work needed here. The core idea needs to be expanded upon, and one paragraph in a bullet point really won't work.
- We also don't use Reddit names anymore, so it's best to replace that with just "wanderer"
- The article uses a lot of run-off sentences which just ruin the flow. They need to be combined and expanded upon to be effective.
- We have our fair share of basement levels, so this feels… overdone and generic.

Don't let these crits discourage you, though! Read through what we have on the wiki and see what has been done, what hasn't and what intrigues you! You can even pick up a few tricks by reading articles, like how to do better flow and coding!

Keep writing! ^^

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