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		<title>Looking For Critique and/or Greenlight</title>
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				<title>Re: Looking For Critique and/or Greenlight</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 22 Feb 2022 17:55:23 +0000</pubDate>
				<wikidot:authorName>YourWeirdPlant</wikidot:authorName>				<wikidot:authorUserId>7841421</wikidot:authorUserId>				<content:encoded>
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						 <p>Hey, mate!<br /> I decided to look over your entity, and if possible/agreed to, I can look over your other stuff.<br /> () is what I’m highlighting, [] is something I’m saying/suggesting.<br /> SPaG is shown in blockquotes.</p> <div class="collapsible-block"> <div class="collapsible-block-folded"><a class="collapsible-block-link" href="javascript:;">SPaG</a></div> <div class="collapsible-block-unfolded" style="display:none"> <div class="collapsible-block-unfolded-link"><a class="collapsible-block-link" href="javascript:;">Hide&nbsp;SPaG</a></div> <div class="collapsible-block-content"> <div class="blockquote"> <p>…to be vaguely humanoid beings(,) with elongated limbs.</p> </div> <div class="blockquote"> <p>…extremely hostile towards non-subdued wanderers who happen (to be) in their level.</p> </div> <div class="blockquote"> <p>feet tall(,) and have leathery grey skin.</p> </div> <div class="blockquote"> <p>…have encountered this species, as a majority of them do not make…</p> </div> <div class="blockquote"> <p>…conversations held by Stalkers, when they assume humans are not listening.</p> </div> <br /> Ok, that’s all the SPaG I see.</div> </div> </div> <div class="collapsible-block"> <div class="collapsible-block-folded"><a class="collapsible-block-link" href="javascript:;">Critique&nbsp;or&nbsp;Fixing</a></div> <div class="collapsible-block-unfolded" style="display:none"> <div class="collapsible-block-unfolded-link"><a class="collapsible-block-link" href="javascript:;">Hide&nbsp;Critique/Fixing</a></div> <div class="collapsible-block-content"> <p>So, the idea is…somewhat good.<br /> However, we don’t get what they make, and more than likely, the best solution is to make entities on your own.<br /> Though I do like the entity making other entities.<br /> It adds a whole new danger to them, making them scary and could strike fear in wanderer’s.<br /> Now, in the Author collapsible, the Author name means your username. So, in your case, it wouldn’t be MJ Howler, it’ll be b1zarr3vel.<br /> To add Links, simply copy the page link, so: <a href="http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/level-11">http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/level-11</a>. Then, place a |(this is not a L, but a vertical bar) along with what you want to name the link with. After that, put three brackets; [[[. For Example, <a href="http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/level-11">The Endless City.</a> Without the brackets, it would be <a href="http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/level-11">http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/level-11</a> | The Endless City.</p> </div> </div> </div> <div class="collapsible-block"> <div class="collapsible-block-folded"><a class="collapsible-block-link" href="javascript:;">Overall&nbsp;Rating</a></div> <div class="collapsible-block-unfolded" style="display:none"> <div class="collapsible-block-unfolded-link"><a class="collapsible-block-link" href="javascript:;">Good&nbsp;Work,&nbsp;just&nbsp;keep&nbsp;going</a></div> <div class="collapsible-block-content"> <p>Idea: 7<br /> Execution: 5<br /> Entities: 6. Stalkers sound interesting(I did read the Stalkers tab to get an idea of em)<br /> Story:(I don’t believe you tried to get one, so no score for this.)<br /> Creepiness/Fear/Would it strike fear in a wanderer?: I believe they can be <em>slightly</em> more creepy. The drawing is creepy, however just not enough. No score, rn. You don’t have to go with creepy, just tell me what feeling you want the most strike in.<br /> Official sounding: 8.<br /> Potential: 10.<br /> Overall(based on calculator): 7.</p> </div> </div> </div> <p>〰️🌱</p> 
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				<title>Looking For Critique and/or Greenlight</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 18 Feb 2022 00:45:10 +0000</pubDate>
				<wikidot:authorName>b1zarr3vel</wikidot:authorName>				<wikidot:authorUserId>7552067</wikidot:authorUserId>				<content:encoded>
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						 <p>So I've written an entity article and I was wondering if I could get someone to look over it and possibly greenlight it?</p> <p>here's my sandbox, it's in the first tab :)<br /> <a href="http://backrooms-sandbox-2.wikidot.com/mj-howler">http://backrooms-sandbox-2.wikidot.com/mj-howler</a></p> 
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