Comments for page "(TRIMMED) Entity 85 - "Paralies"" https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13932788/trimmed-entity-85-paralies Posts in the discussion thread "(TRIMMED) Entity 85 - "Paralies"" Wed, 07 Oct 2026 22:07:42 +0000 http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13932788#post-6776244 -1 These are literally the Yeerks from animorphs https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13932788/trimmed-entity-85-paralies#post-6776244 Thu, 16 Jan 2025 18:34:13 +0000 BlueSignet 7867242 Title.

They're not even used as intelligently as the Yeerks.

]]> http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13932788#post-5549648 This is Genuinely Terrible Writing, Unfortunately https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13932788/trimmed-entity-85-paralies#post-5549648 Mon, 29 Aug 2022 02:28:54 +0000 Meji Kath 7951820 The base idea is, fine i guess, but why a snake? Like the image is literally just a snake. Immediately removed any immersion i could have. That, paired with the downright cringy writing makes it difficult to even finish reading the whole thing. Please, for the love of god, this needs a massive overhaul.

]]> http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13932788#post-5336221 -1 https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13932788/trimmed-entity-85-paralies#post-5336221 Mon, 30 May 2022 05:43:53 +0000 Hikarinu 7849669 Fine concept, but the actual writing needs a bit of revision and touching up. The sentences just do not flow well at all and don't feel terribly cohesive. I'd like to see this page fixed up one day.

]]> http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13932788#post-5052118 (no title) https://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13932788/trimmed-entity-85-paralies#post-5052118 Thu, 12 Aug 2021 04:26:06 +0000 saiconihachida 4595861 What an ungodly creecher. If I saw one I would fucking rip it apart and burn it alive. Fuck paralies breh. I hope they die horribly within any tale written. I'll make sure they die agonizingly in my future tales that's for sure!

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