Comments for page "Level 71 - "Void Basement""

-1

Thu, 27 Nov 2025 22:55:19 +0000

This level definitely needs a rewrite. There's very little information about what it's actually about. It looks like the author just wanted to write a mysterious entrance to Shady Gray 😔

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Wed, 07 May 2025 10:50:24 +0000

I suppose this level acts as an entrance to TH3 SH4DY GR3Y

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Sun, 26 Jan 2025 18:06:31 +0000

I can't say i get it. even if i did get it, this is shockingly shallow. its just some guy talking to himself with vaguely creepy word salad.

1:00 am binge-read session

Tue, 03 Sep 2024 23:27:32 +0000

the only interesting line:

Like folding of laundry… The thin warm c0ld overlap of sadness.

otherwise, the article lacks any real substance. the page seems almost unfinished, and the author skims over most of the description to get straight to the gimmick. much of the first paragraphs feel unnecessary. if you don't like doing clinical, then you don't have to do clinical.

-1

Mon, 15 Jan 2024 21:35:11 +0000

mid

Re: -1

Wed, 20 Dec 2023 16:42:03 +0000

Its for the entrance of TH3 SH4DY GR3Y

Re: -1

Mon, 16 Oct 2023 21:53:12 +0000

Lol agree this felt like a fanpage for the shady gr3y

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Thu, 27 Jul 2023 21:12:32 +0000

Nice article, but… what is the level about? Did i miss something?

-1

Sat, 17 Jun 2023 02:21:48 +0000

this only feels like an excuse to show off some fancy html. almost all of it was entirely unnecessary.

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Fri, 25 Nov 2022 15:07:49 +0000

I thought about it…

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Tue, 19 Apr 2022 17:29:59 +0000

Imagine some person actually reporting this as an error XD

good stuff i guess

Mon, 27 Dec 2021 20:54:18 +0000

Interesting concept, but it just feels a little too dramatized. I don't need 9 whys to get the point, so making it subtler might help. Not a downvote, but not an upvote.

:D

Tue, 23 Mar 2021 14:01:22 +0000

Format screw done right. +1

Re: +1

Mon, 30 Nov 2020 17:22:25 +0000

Well, it's kinda how this strange process works, you get an understanding of where you are going when this event takes place. There will be more Tales and Levels to expand it too. And, I agree that it's more of a new Level then a rewrite, that is because Level 71 never really had much content, but this expands it a lot and that might make it seem like a new Level. And the code was borrowed from Level 404, as 'etoisle' helped out with the code, and said it's fine to use their code from Level 404 as well. Overall, thank you for your kind words!

+1

Thu, 26 Nov 2020 22:11:04 +0000

Hm. There are definitely parts of this level that feel off to me. Mostly the fact that the character is very articulate, and understands exactly what is happening to them, which breaks immersion for me a bit. Still, it's very, very good, so definitely a +1 from me. Also, it's not really a rewrite of the old 71 except that it has the same image lol. Also, also, I recognize that code lol.

woah, what?

Tue, 24 Nov 2020 12:39:20 +0000

that was interesting.. how

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Tue, 24 Nov 2020 03:42:34 +0000

I have already expressed my opinions on this. It is well written, and works amazingly. However, I simply am not a fan of the concept, and the story doesn't have a satisfying enough ending for me to be comfortable upvoting

Eh, I have decided to rescind my downvote and hesitantly turn into an upvote, largely due to the appeal. It feels off to me still, but as of now, I am fine with upvoting this