Comments for page "(TRIMMED) Level 190 - "School Detention""

Re: -1

Tue, 25 Mar 2025 16:13:54 +0000

I agree, most of the writing was redundant. With one of the phrases being "destroyed by unknown means" and a footnote being "it is unconfirmed which entity did it" is saying the same thing twice. The concept is a good idea but could def use some grammar and writing improvements. Keep improving!

1:00 am binge-read session

Fri, 06 Dec 2024 19:53:36 +0000

2020 nothingburger. be more original.

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Tue, 18 Apr 2023 18:55:58 +0000

Oi mate level 52 has been deleted to the snow level.

Re: -1

Wed, 08 Feb 2023 07:58:27 +0000

I agree, as a lot of the grammar is… special.

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Sun, 26 Jun 2022 06:38:04 +0000

the writing could be improved, at the moment it is very poor in places.

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Tue, 10 Nov 2020 18:00:48 +0000

First time publishing an entry here :D
I want to thank all the good peeps who helped me with the crits.

Images sources:

Hallway was taken from Lorain High School hallway, by Matt Dempsey on Wikimedia Commons;
exit was taken from Emergency Exit Doors (49399118683), by Mike Mozart on Wikimedia Commons;
the third image, about the drawn signals, was made by me