we can destroy ourselves.

True, but we don't want to. We are just trying to survive and get back to the place we call home.

You can struggle in the woods and still cut trees.

Once again, true, but that doesn't mean that we are destroying the forest. We, as a society, are struggling to restore some of the forests by replanting trees. The most levels in the backrooms appear to be infinite, so even if we affect part of the level, it won't destroy the whole thing. You can cut down part of a forest, and it won't mean getting rid of all of it.
I know I repeated myself some, but you get my point.

there is no human equal to another, therefore putting a physical description is impossible.

this is stupid. Yes, no too humans look like each other perfectly, but all humans look like..humans. Shocking I know.

Its not like some humans have 4 arms or 65 eyeballs or have feathers. There is still a blanket description that can fit all humans. Its not like we can't describe what certain animals look like because they may look different from one another. That would be kinda stupid.

However, why are we Entity 1?,

question marks act like a period. Placing a comma after one like this makes no grammatical sense.

this should not be So.

the so should not be capaltilized. also, the so really doesn't need to be in this sentence. It only serves to make it more confusing.

We are an "anomaly" so to speak, an error that, like a snowball rolling down a hill, has been growing, and we are more and more here, if we were not here, the entities would not be aggressive nor would we have to see them.

too long with too many commas. could easily be broken up into something better like

We are an "anomaly, an error that, like a snowball rolling down a hill, has been growing. If we had never grown in the first place, we would never have seen these entities, and they would not be aggressive.

each thing we see and / or learn here,

should be And/or. There shouldn't be a space.

From our point of view, we didn't discover it until the creation of this file.

this makes no sense. How have we not discovered humans until the creation of this file? Even in the context of this file, this is a confusing remark.

They know what we are capable of, how far we can go.

there should be an and after the comma

Lose Hope

Why is this bolded?

On to concept stuff

The concept is fine I guess, it is a little cliche, which I dislike a bit.

I cannot count how many times people talk about humans in terms of being invasive or some other type of environmental message related to humanity.

I don't think this article really treads any new ground, and because of how much I hear this concept repeated, it feels like a drag on the article as a whole.

Because of this and the SPaG/Writing quality, along with the fact it feels very short and it has an overdone concept, this article is a downvote for me.

21 upvotes

This was just a twenty-five minutes draft, please stop this, it was bait

Can you give feedback of the article instead of say comment that doesn't add nothing new?

Thoughts: I really like how poetic this is. It has this feel of "we have no chance, but we don't mean to be that way." I like how this is written, it feels like a piece of poetry. I love how nice this is overall. The concept is kind of strange, but the execution could not have been done better.

Result: +1

lmao