Comments for page "(ARCHIVED) Level 2 - "Pipe Dreams""

Re: (Pre-Rewrite)

Tue, 28 Nov 2023 05:06:27 +0000

It's not being downvoted for 1 reason.
Nostalgia.

+1

Tue, 28 Nov 2023 05:05:30 +0000

Way better than that new rewrite. Too overcomplicated for what's literally the third level. Even though, my main issue with the rewrite is the new name, I'd still prefer this version over the new one.

-1

Wed, 14 Jun 2023 15:19:00 +0000

spag is bad, and some parts that could have been expanded upon only feel like an afterthought due to the author not going further than just 2 sentences on each of them.

Re: When will the rewrite be done and posted?

Thu, 13 Apr 2023 14:46:55 +0000

uh idk

Re: Level 2 rewrite??

Thu, 13 Apr 2023 14:46:15 +0000

1000dumplings requested for it to be deleted from the plane of existence

When will the rewrite be done and posted?

Thu, 13 Apr 2023 14:39:14 +0000

When will the rewrite be done and posted?

Re: -1

Mon, 10 Apr 2023 05:06:31 +0000

Good thing this one is also under rewrite! Another old one with outdated quality standards, not that the concept isn't interesting.

-1

Sun, 09 Apr 2023 23:17:52 +0000

Boring and short. Offers nothing other than spooky liquid and some pipes.

Good atmosphere, sloppy execution

Tue, 21 Feb 2023 03:23:17 +0000

The horror of this level is good, levels 0 and 1, while having problems, are at least non-hostile. This place is actively out to get you. This is also the first place with entities, which is neat. However, the other thing different from 0 and 1 is bad writing.
"You can also find Mark in employee bathrooms on Level 2."
Who's mark? I feel like this could use a crosslink.
"The only thing you need to know, and can know, is to run away the moment you see one."
This is less clincical and more 2009 creepypasta.
"The Entity shown in the picture above has not been identified, and the fate of the original photographer is unknown."
Good line, but a respectable organization like MEG wouldn't keep this without verification. I doubt meg would believe any old sod who told someone about a backrooms moment.
The Survivors are a generally weak concept. I mean, what are they survivors of? Also, their intro contains SpaG issues, which are easy to correct.
And finally, my personal favorite
"If you no-clip into an extremely hot area in Level 2, you can wind up in Level 2.1."
ORANGE LINKS. Just get rid of these or allow people to rewrite said levels.

Overall good concept ruined by very sloppy execution
5/10, -1

Re: A stupid question

Wed, 04 Jan 2023 14:27:24 +0000

well, a big reason is the author of this entry is banned and pretty much all of their pages can be rewritten so someone applies for this one as well. Another important reason is that the page just…isn't very good and people want to see it rewritten.

A stupid question

Wed, 04 Jan 2023 10:24:19 +0000

Level 2 is rewriting. I want to know why such a classic level has to be rewritten.

(Pre-Rewrite)

Sat, 19 Nov 2022 22:06:36 +0000

This article is very poorly executed… The image is okay, but:

1 - what's with the long list of entities? I can think of other ways to execute those - tell us more about the abundance of these entities, any unusual behavior, if they're native to that level, etc.

2 - unnecessary, cringeworthy warning that you should run away from hostile entity X when it's pretty clear any of the other entities listed are hostile and to be avoided. It's a huge offender.

3 - Tonally wrong, written as if i was something else.

How is this not being downvoted?

Re: stanley's move

Wed, 19 Oct 2022 18:03:14 +0000

Short(people)cut!

Re: Level 2 rewrite??

Wed, 28 Sep 2022 03:56:52 +0000

Quick Question: What happened to 1000dumplings?

I noticed that pretty much every single article that they wrote is currently getting rewritten. Why is that? Did they get banned? If so, what happened to cause it?

Re: Level 2 rewrite??

Sun, 18 Sep 2022 00:28:42 +0000

Written by 1000dumplings

Level 2 rewrite??

Sat, 17 Sep 2022 23:15:11 +0000

Level 2 is under rewrite? Why? As far as I see, this page holds a rating over +100 and there's no reason to rewrite it.

Sorry I didn't see it!

noice

Sun, 11 Sep 2022 14:45:45 +0000

imagine being the poor unlucky mother-lover to noclip here from reality and expecting a normal backrooms experience

-1

Mon, 05 Sep 2022 17:40:00 +0000

This level exhibits similar problems to the previous two articles (level 0 and level 1) except its so, so much worse. I can say that 0 and 1 had some semblance of good writing. I don't believe this level does. It takes all the conceptual issues with the previous two entries and then goes and makes a boring article out of them. Lacks narrative, lacks decent writing, lacks interesting concept…if level 4 didn't exist in its current state this would probably be the weakest out of 0-11. At least 7 has some sort of interesting conceptual stuff. this does not.

pipe

Mon, 05 Sep 2022 07:13:04 +0000

Pipe man is coming to whoop your ass

This is actually kinda scary

Sat, 13 Aug 2022 14:35:26 +0000

This level actually looks terrifying because of the image and the level's nature. it looks like a level i would want to avoid as much as i can

stanley's move

Thu, 28 Apr 2022 16:30:06 +0000

dunno why im compled, but i am, so lets do it.

stanley in the gmod dark room

next stop: lvl 4

Office Space

Fri, 04 Mar 2022 23:56:15 +0000

Haha, Office Space; like the movie, Office Space.

-1

Mon, 14 Feb 2022 04:15:41 +0000

Minor SPaG errors, also doesn't feel like there is enough description. In general it's fine, but compared to the other first few levels (Level 0, Level 1, Level 3) it's still kinda bland.

Off topic but I bought a Backrooms video game and can't past Level 2, pls halp.

Level rate

Thu, 21 Oct 2021 05:59:13 +0000

So I’ve recently found a post made by user Gasterblaster1 that rated level 41. I was bored so I decided to make my adaptation and rate levels until I get bored. All credit for the idea goes for Gasterblaster1 btw.
Does it fit with the rest of the backrooms?: Yes
Is it unsettling?: Yes
Does it feel unnatural?: Kinda
Is the concept unique?: Yes
Do i feel i have been here before?: Yes
Closing thoughts: A really good level. For me honestly it’s more familiar than level 0

:D

Wed, 31 Mar 2021 16:58:00 +0000

7/10

I mean, the idea is certainly better than Level 1. Some minor spag errors (eg. long ass entity list) but not a bad feel overall.

idea: 7/10
execution: 7/10

downvote reasoning bcause i said so

Sun, 28 Mar 2021 05:33:43 +0000

it isn't like… horrible?

there's a lotta grammar errors and sentence flow mishaps, though minimal enough that i could theoretically ignore em. my main complaint is the longass comma list of entities. doesn't look good like. at all tbh. just generally could use some reworking imho

Re: Note

Fri, 02 Oct 2020 13:07:59 +0000

Yeah I didn't get that. Level 3 is meant to be more dangerous than level 2 and besides its possible to live on it. It's just Difficult to survive. That was true in both the Classic and Modern Canons.

Re: Note

Fri, 02 Oct 2020 01:10:39 +0000

Thanks for pointing that out.
The difficulty has been re-set to Class 2

Note

Wed, 30 Sep 2020 15:26:09 +0000

Please when you're Changing the Survival Difficultly Change the Tags as well, I did it for you this time but next time you're on your own.

-From Lawer