Loss Of Humanity/Everything Fades… / Discussion

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[novote contest bias]

scutoid studios 03 Mar 2024 19:37

wow my team is 100% shat
good job though lol

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+1

ForestIsWatching 03 Mar 2024 19:38

The quote in the middle of the page sorta interfeired with the immersion, just not enough to break it. I have found two SPaG errors, but that is about it. I would have advised against contractions here, but I suppose that depends on stylistic choice in this case.

Overall, a solid piece of writing.

Edit: I would like to clarify that these aren't exactly the smallest of issues; my upvote, in fact, was slightly hesitant.

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Please mind the Forest.

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+1, as simple as that

Praetor3005 03 Mar 2024 20:59

Good introduction to the canon, actually!

It shows the consequences of the blackout, and remain generic enough for the last question to really be felt deeply.

What will I do? Upvote this, I guess. I look forward to the rest!

This is just the begining, after all, and I crave more lore and devlopment.

+1

Univ - Wise Explorer 03 Mar 2024 20:59

Sky3, I love the dark and mysterious tone of your articles. I especially like the creepiness of the cryptic messages at the end, it was exactly what I was going for with Level 514 although that failed kind of miserably. Great work though, a really thought-provoking read. +1

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+1 from Goerman

Robert Goerman 04 Mar 2024 18:22

Short, but sweet. Did the job. Just like my upvote.

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Super-Robot14 08 Mar 2024 20:01

automatic upvote for the use of my favorite poem. (I'll go read the rest of it now)

edit: I didn't ever read this, going to novote

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