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An amazing rewrite of the "yep its a level I guess" that was the original level 58
there is a wiki called the backrooms wiki, and its a glorious wiki, although it has its issues, I am proud to be a part of it, it stands for variety, it stands for creativity, and it stands for quality. one of the only backrooms wikis where levels like level 23, level 246 and level 37 can co exist! long live the backrooms wiki. the backrooms wiki, 2020-2024.
Wow a page that uses its own worldbuilding in a meaninful way to set up an interesting setting that is not only good by itself but can also be developped in future stories thanks to all the information that has been set up, while doing an excellent job at keeping what made the original page interesting in its core.
Awesome work! Always good to see a great rewrite of an old underdevelopped page.
Who’s saying there isn’t plans to add more? Anyways, thanks so much for greenlighting and critting this!!
A long but great read, you really brought this level back to life : )
- Univ
Where is the classic image I saw in the sanbox? (the first image)
Unfortunately it wasn’t CC compliant so I couldn’t use it. :(
I realized it wasn't CC-compliant a little too late, so Block had to quickly change it to a CC one.
excellent rewrite! a bit long, but it holds its weight. good job :3
Chara
Commonly known as GamerM602
The demon that comes when you call its name.
I liked it. A lot!
Might refer to it in the future as BNTG lore figures in my future writings.
If I am incorrect, I apologize, but in the first paragraph of the Storerooms section, I think a sentence is missing a word. "Occasionally, these lights will go out for various (word missing?), leaving any inhabitants in complete darkness."
If this is your first page, I look forward to more of your talent.
+1 from Goerman…
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
Thank you!! Feel free to use anything or any character here!
Now Level 58 looks more professional and well written, exactly as BlockHead42 had said. Honestly I would like this to also happen with the levels with small information, but I still liked it. Good rewrite and good original article.
This did well as a rewrite. i'm too exhausted to say anything else.
i'd like to point out one thing
you say "Tegan Trees are used to grow Tegan Fruit, only appearing in The Waterparks of Level 58."
then later you say "The Tegan Fruit Farm is a Storeroom remodelled into an agricultural patch, containing as many Tegan Trees as possible."
do they just collect the trees than put it there? or somehow grow them in there?
Tegan Trees grow from the blue plastic only found in the Waterparks, however, the BNTG transported some into one of the storage room. Since the Tegan trees only growth condition is some space and the blue plastic they can technically grow anywhere in the backrooms as long as the Level 58 exclusive blue plastic is there.
A solid rewrite for sure, I definitely think you did the OG article justice.
It's a +1 however I really wish it was a lot more of a concise read.
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first off, i like the tegan fruit plot point. a resource that grants vitamins and immunity in exchange for turning your skin into plastic is an interesting commodity within a dangerous place like the backrooms! however, the sections leading up to that point drag considerably. i'm not sure how many descriptions of these different zones were really necessary, as most of them were generic commercial environments that don't serve to further the plot.
Within the pools are collections of dry, red leaves, their origin unknown as the level seemingly has no exterior.
Within the till there normally are a variety of coins and notes, all originating from different parts of the Frontrooms.
details like these are what make clinical descriptions so fun to read! i just wish we'd gotten more of these instead of specific materials and measurements for each surface present in the room. as of now, i feel like the article took up way too much time to communicate its content.
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