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Love the amount of detail put into this!! The concept and execution are near perfect. Easy +1
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Hey, wasn't the deadline for this a month ago? I kid, I kid :3
Personally, I like these types of pages, where it looks like archived information, recordings or records. +1 for the organization, grammar and how the information is mostly formed.
Note: More pages like this would be nice, but not everything is archived, recordings or records.
was the problem with the original being that once your cured, you never get the disease again thing?
Nice. You managed to deepen a pretty shallow pool and made a great article. Well done, +1.
"By excluding the human factor, aren't we risking the kind of personal detachment from a history that may, heaven forbid, lead us to one day repeat it? And in the end, isn't the human factor the only true difference between us and the enemy we now refer to as 'the living dead'?" -Max Brooks, from World War Z: An Oral History of the Zombie War, written by Max Brooks
In terms of the page's visuals and CSS work, this page is a 10/10. Not only does it look really good, but it even feels like you're actually there on a computer in The Backrooms reading all of this information, going through the files, and learning more about the disease. However, the subject matter is the weakest part of this page. If we had this exact same format but the page was about something else- something more anomalous and clearly specific to The Backrooms- this would probably be one of the best pages on the site. But The Disease is just a boring Entity. It just feels like a normal fictional virus, and I have to give credit for taking that concept and giving it such an interesting page. But ultimately I feel this doesn't need to be an Entity page, and unfortunately the stellar CSS and formatting, to me, feels wasted on a lackluster Entity.
Agreed, thus why I chose to no-vote as well, but I didn't take into account the theme.
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