[SEEKING CRITIQUE AND GREENLIGHT]-Level 505 - "Online Judging"

[SEEKING CRITIQUE AND GREENLIGHT]-Level 505 - "Online Judging"

I_am_a_dragon 21 Nov 2023 11:24

http://backrooms-sandbox-2.wikidot.com/asiar-s-505

Error012 21 Nov 2023 20:23

The minutes are ticking and maybe I can criticize you, since I have nothing to do.

Level 505 - "Online Judging"

Error012 21 Nov 2023 20:54

Here is my review:

On the computer, type something...

Level 505 is the 506th Level of the Backrooms.

Make the level part of "506th Level" lowercase.

but immediately take effect on the wanderer.So staying in

Leave space after the period.

M.E.G. will improve it as soon as possible.

Delete the point after M.E.G

"The proctor"

All the parts where you mention "The Proctor" capitalize the first letters, then capitalize the first letters in the "The Coder" part.

which wanders around inside the level."The proctor"

Leave space after the period.

answers.Wanderers who engage in these acts at the same

Leave space after the period.

time receive some punishment.What these punishments are

Leave space after the period.

is unknown, as the wanderders who reported the presence of

Is "Wanderers".

similar to "the coder", but do not attack wanderers when they are not "cheating".It should therefore be considered a neutral entity.

Is "The Coder" and leave space after the period.

Because of the special effect of level 505,

Put "Level 505".

It's a very good idea, for me. So I give it a +1 even though it's not on the page yet. Some details need to be polished but the idea is good, I hope they give you the Green Light.

Last edited on 21 Nov 2023 20:56 by Error012 Show more