What's with all these pages with chairs (/j)
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Just a high schooler who thinks he is good at writing. Likes working on a lot of stuff, ranging from writing for the Backrooms Wiki, to providing critique, and reading. ~ Pen.
"The truth is the truth. What changes is what we know about it and what we're willing to believe."
- Jonathan Maberry, Rot and Ruin
Hello Vivamus, I wanted to reach out to you for some time now and if you can, I could use you help (and also if you want to help myself write my article.) I have been writing an entity article for some time now but I feel it would work best if I changed the tone to an Eyes of Argos theme. I would appreciate if you could reach out to me in your earliest convenience if your interested. Thanks again Vivamus.
From, Venomous Mount
Like to see where this goes…
Maybe, I will sit down first.
I'm the storm chair that is approaching!
Immortal temptation
Takes over my mind
Condemned
Falling weak on my knees
Summon the strength
Of Mayhem
I am the storm that is approaching
Provoking
Black clouds in isolation
I am reclaimer of my name
Born in flames
I have been blessed
My family crest is a demon of death
Forsakened I am awakened
A phoenix’s ash in dark divine
Descending misery
Destiny chasing time
Inherit the nightmare
Surrounded by fate
Can’t run away
Keep walking the line
Between the light
Led astray
Through vacant halls I won’t surrender
The truth revealed in eyes of ember
We fight through fire and ice forever
Two souls once lost and now they remember
I am the storm that is approaching
Provoking
Black clouds in isolation
I am reclaimer of my name
Born in flames
I have been blessed
My family crest is a demon of death
Forsakened I am awakened
A phoenix’s ash in dark divine
Descending misery
Destiny chasing time
Disappear into the night
Lost shadows left behind
Obsession’s pulling me
Fading I’ve come to take what’s mine
Lurking in the shadows under veil of night
Constellations of blood pirouette
Dancing through the graves of those who stand at my feet
Dreams of the black throne I keep on repeat
A derelict of dark summoned from the ashes
The puppet master congregates all the masses
Pulling strings twisting minds as blades hit
You want this power then come try and take it
Beyond the tree
Fire burns
Secret love
Bloodline yearns
Dark minds embrace
Crimson Joy
Does your dim heart
Heal or Destroy?
Bury the light deep within
Cast aside there’s no coming home
We’re burning chaos in the wind
Drifting in the ocean all alone
I know, I can do it.
Great page! It's funny how late I am reading this, but this was a good classicon page!
Idk, maybe I’m not looking into it correctly, but it just failed to fully grab my attention. It feels ridiculous, which may be the point but still. Why the hell did an archivist spend years studying this one chair? The cult thing was…fine ig but it just felt dull. Clinical tone was good but the concept was just lacking imo, or the way the article was formatted failed to allow the good parts of the concept to shine through. Though a lot of classic pages experience this, so I will give you that.
I personally thought it was funny and therefore overlooked the bad aspects. Said bad aspects being directly pointed out does kinda show how ridiculous the page is. I still personally like it though.
This definitely feels more like an SCP than a Backrooms object but I still like it. I'm not gonna criticise too much cause it is a Classicon article and there's a lot of limitations with classicon but I do think this could have been better written. It's kinda confusing and not in a way that works. But also it's weird in a fun way. Could be improved but it's a fun page overall.