The Peace Beneath A Pen - A "Through Our Eyes" Short Tale / Discussion

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No way... after like... a year...

TrailmixNCocoa 14 Sep 2023 04:05

She has POSTED! HalleLUJAH!

Anyways hi guys, it's been *counts with fingers* many weeks. Many many weeks. So many actually that I graduated high school and am now a whole college student. I've missed you <3

I give my biggest thanks to scutoid studios and Mctoran for their critique (and scoot in particular for css help, you angel-) and, as always, SnomWriting for his neverending support behind the scenes. Your help is undoubtedly influential for my return. Thank you all!

As a treat for how long i've been gone, please enjoy this extremely short Masked Maidens tale featuring my little babies, the Holmes twins! I promise I'll be here a bit more often from now on. Hope you like it! Love y'all <333

omfg the the the +1

scutoid studios 14 Sep 2023 04:12

FR FR the holmies tale I can't believe it

was really fun to crit this, it's really good xd

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Re: omfg the the the +1

TrailmixNCocoa 14 Sep 2023 16:00

I do recommend live critiquing on google docs that was hella funny

PenOrSaber1 14 Sep 2023 13:17

This was a really good emotional read that I enjoyed. I find that you've made me realize something that I never thought about, and that's something truly special for any article, not just one on a wiki.
A definite plus one in my book.

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Just a high schooler who thinks he is good at writing. Likes working on a lot of stuff, ranging from writing for the Backrooms Wiki, to providing critique, and reading. ~ Pen.
"The truth is the truth. What changes is what we know about it and what we're willing to believe."
- Jonathan Maberry, Rot and Ruin

TrailmixNCocoa 14 Sep 2023 16:00

I'm very glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading.