Letter From The One You Left Behind / Discussion

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Little Drabble of Mine

BlueSignet 09 Aug 2023 15:27

Thought I'd try my hand at a tale using the drabble format.

I've had this idea of a piece from the perspective of someone who'd lost someone to the Backrooms. What do they think? What do they want? There's so much emotion there that I had to write something!

Since a drabble is only 100 words, I focused on the emotion, and think I did a pretty great job (if I do say so myself).

PenOrSaber1 09 Aug 2023 15:31

I'm suprised such a sort article can manage to convey such strong emotions. I say you achieved what you set out to do. I have to give this my plus one.
Great job!

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scutoid studios 09 Aug 2023 16:30

reminds me of something i'm going to write ! very good

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pnn wepm 09 Aug 2023 19:30

It's short, but I can't complain since you said you wanted it to be exactly 100 words long. So here, take this +1

BlueSignet 09 Aug 2023 21:49

Haha, yeah. Drabbles are meant to be extremely short. It's supposed to test your writing abilities since 100 words is not a lot. They're super fun to try though!

+1

SecondtoInfinity 09 Aug 2023 20:44

Quite good! I'd say my largest gripe is actually the title

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Re: +1

BlueSignet 09 Aug 2023 21:50

Thanks! What would you change about the title?

oh

aster_argyle 10 Aug 2023 08:07

wow this is your third article! haha
So i think i can expect your author page will be posted soon haha lol

Re: oh

BlueSignet 10 Aug 2023 23:36

And done!

Re: oh

aster_argyle 11 Aug 2023 02:03

:O

+1

Agent Skyes 14 Jan 2024 14:22

Why can the people from the Frontrooms read the MEG database??? Well written but the premise is flawed.

Last edited on 16 Jan 2024 22:01 by Agent Skyes Show more

Re: -1

BlueSignet 14 Jan 2024 15:41

It's somewhat implied in the WiFi page that signals can occasionally get to the Frontrooms. So I expanded off of that.

Anyway thanks!

Re: +1

Agent Skyes 16 Jan 2024 22:02

Changed my downvote to an upvote, I guess it does make sense.

smollfri 11 Oct 2024 00:46

I recently read a page about how the M.E.G was formed. Could this be Mikayla?!??!?!?? (ignore me, I'm being stupid)