ForestIsWatching
Yes. Finally! We have Part Two.
Thank you for both your upvote and your comment. Both are very much appreciated. I mean that.
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FINALLY. This was absolutely amazing. I'd describe what exactly I liked, but there's no need. This was a work of art, (again). Here's a +1 from ur fanboy lol.
+1
I exist for the sole purpose of writing this
Iamalemon,
Thank you, friend and colleague.
But why do the MiB want Anne Dunne dead?
Who owns the ring?
Is the Harbinger Arch a portal to the Frontrooms?
Did I write myself into a corner?
Not on your life! All will be revealed.
Thank you again for your upvote and kindness.
Hi!I am the Cn translator of your Level 710 and annes-lament.REALLY enjoyed the fantasy properties in your articles,like reading a novel by a professional writer!CAN'T WAIT to translate the articcle for your Cn fans now!Hope Anne and Amy will have a good ending,they all so lovable.TAT
I luv blonde muscle man.
momsknife,
I just returned home from an out-of-town trip and did not have Internet access. Sorry for the delay in responding.
Thank you, friend and colleague, for bringing Anne and Amy to a larger audience. I added a photo of their M.E.G. "Dog Tags" to "Anne's Escape" (2 of 3).
I promise that "Anne's Farewell" (3 of 3) will be full of surprises. Readers will discover who owns the Ring and whether Harbinger Arch is is a genuine exit from the Backrooms to the Frontrooms.
Please let me know the reactions of the readers there.
You must know how authors are.
Thank you again!
first of all, a few things that aren't linked (if they're not linked by intention, then that's fine, but I tend to look at this site as a fictional wikipedia, and everything is linked in wikipedia lol)
Seer Tea in Anne's dialouge and right below the MEGTags image are not linked
Level 365 in the M.E.G. Object of Interest inset is not linked
Level 20 right before the MEGTags image is not linked
Level 170 at the end is not linked
Okay, but besides that I LOVE EVERYTHING
fun adventure, fun characters, positively immaculate images, and terrifying "monster."
this is an incredible beginning, and definitely a great tale :D
DysfunctionalCabinet,
Cody (my grandson) fixed all my boo-boos.
THANK YOU, my friend and colleague, for your kind words and support!
Your grandson is awesome. He sent me a message detailing the reasons and results.
I'm here to support whoever I can :D
Wow… lemme say that again, Wow! This was one hell of a read, and it's only Part 2! Who knows what Part 3 will hold? Another incredible piece of writing by Mr. Goerman! A lot of my general remarks in the previous Entry of the Trilogy will shine through here as well! And most likely within Part 3!
As we go from Anne and Amy's first meet, right into Dunne's protection! An obvious direction being set up in the last Entry, so it works out! The simple action of the characters waiting for the supernatural hitman that we know as The Man in Black to arrive already sets the terrifying reality of this particular situation. Instead, Gunther arrives with a special delivery! The Unicorn on its own is a very interesting weapon of choice, and not one I am personally familiar with. So it is a really neat thing to see yet again!
This leads into the description of Seer Tea! The concepts presented here create a very unique and almost mystical object with its spiritual and psychic properties. Making the texture of such tea feel like literal critters running free throughout your mouth is terrifying alone, but shows bravery by swallowing such exotic beverage! I cannot wait to see more within Object 365!
Then leads to the hunt of the horrifying Man in Black, and what a thrilling chase it was! Almost feels as if its presence is within the writing itself, not just the envision of reading such thing. The characters react swiftly, but enough suspense to feel that they are terrified, and when Anne is literally marked by the MiB, who wouldn't? Everything is on the line, and Anything is on the table.
And what might be on the table? Well spiritual positive vibrations and light from above to protect those that can't protect themselves! A blessing of everything and anything all at once into an astral form of glimmering light! I'm personally a very spiritual person myself, so I vibe with this quite well!
Saving Amy with the brush and its psychic properties is a really neat plot device that I enjoy quite a bit! The interaction between a lost Amy and determined Anne was nice to see and helps develop the friendship aspect even more! Anne's psychic abilities and Amy's experienced set of skills make for one treat of a duo!
I'm assuming all of this is just a "warm up" of sorts for the finally at the end! Especially since this Tale ends on a cliffhanger! I can't wait to finish the series!
+1 as always!
-Stretchster.