sniped
Very good read and interesting storyline. Very similar to another void that exists here, just with less serpents… (/j)
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I can turn this whole chat into the void.
SERPEEEEENTS!
Fox be groovin', be movin', and by god be shootin', but most importantly be writing.
- Signed by: MyrandFox
MyraandFox,
No happy little trees?
No happy little clouds?
You held my interest until the end. Thank you.
Robert
Very nice, love me some mind-melting cosmic horror.
This also just so happens to go very well with a certain…
Annelidan entity I'm rewriting.
Perhaps I'll include a touch of this in it, if you'd be all right with that~
holy crap this is good.
+1
lmao i didnt even know this existed
Very creative and interesting, making for a really good read. Well done on establishing the cryptic theme btw, it really kept me hooked and engaged.
- Univ
Here's my critic score
Originality=5/5
Liminality=4/5
Concept=5/5
Writting =3/5(Decent)
Total = 17/20
This level is very unique for me ,I liked this,very creative and liminal for me.
Totaly worth for upvoting
eh might as well
Originality=3/5
Liminality=3/5
Concept=6/5
Writing=4/5
Total = 16/20
Very unique but repeats the same shtick over again so it can get a little annoying; almost tries a bit too hard to get into the cryptic theme. Concept is awesome although I'm not a writer so I wouldn't know how relatively good it is. Not much liminality but I could care less. Maybe a little more subtlety so there's more mmph in the crazier parts
What's the point in grading things on a 0-5 scale if you're just gonna ignore that and use a 6? /genq
- Snom, Backrooms Wiki Site Admin
SnomWriting, I agree. 0-5 is 0-5. Maybe the 6 was a typo?
I'm surprised I didn't leave my invalid opinion on this yet, considering how long ago I read it.
This article rocks.
Please mind the Forest.
Easily one of the best articles on the wiki; +1.
Just a high schooler who thinks he is good at writing. Likes working on a lot of stuff, ranging from writing for the Backrooms Wiki, to providing critique, and reading. ~ Pen.
"The truth is the truth. What changes is what we know about it and what we're willing to believe."
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