Rika's Flower Commentary!
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I do think the premise is pretty amusing, but there's a lot of SPaG errors, especially basic ones, and structurally it's kind of all over the place. It feels like you didn't really have any outline or plan in mind and just wrote details about the burgers on the spot. This leads to the information in the article being really disorganized and pretty hard to read. Also, there's a bit of a dichotomy between the discovery, which has the wanderer not really find out or provide a lot of information on the entity, and the page containing lots of information. The overall concept is wholesome, but the presentations and little quips in the article are lacking in execution. I do admit I enjoyed the chatroom dialogue though.