I still feel as if the entry is relatively underwhelming. It's much better than it was previously, but I feel like there's more you could've done. The whole "changing terrain" thing has been done before, along with the article itself not having much pay off. You kinda slowly hint at this cool thing in the beginning, only for it to end with "alright the level changed, here's another file revision." Like there just could've been a lot more done there in my opinion. Feels like a huge missed opportunity. I'm upvoting this only because the writing and stuff is actually not too bad, it was pretty hesitant though, as I feel like you could've done more, and made it slightly less underwhelming.
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Pretty good! I love the idea of it, kept me interested while reading all of it. Also, I'm glad that you added Level 75 as a way to enter it — I edited the exits of Level 75 page too.
First off, the idea of this level is already done before. Because of this, the level is stale and unoriginal. The original level had one interesting quirk: it was previously in the frontrooms. Try to make the level more original.
(apologies if this is informal, I dont really enjoy typing like a critic for this) Although underwhelming, I still kinda liked it! +1, Despite what i said before, there has been way worse, i love the format used, template used, etc. Although simple, it kept me entertained and willing to read to the end, and left me without extreme disappointment. This is something alot of short levels fail to give me, enjoyment.
Mollytov Cocktail
Thank you! I do agree with you on the underwhelming part, I wanted to add "mystery" to the level but I never really gave it a good conclusion other than "oh this is isn't what we thought it was" lmao. Thank you for the +1
Very good, I like how the main character is confused about the level. I wonder, he belongs to a group like the M.E.G. or he's a loner wanderer?
This article has a lot of potential, but it's just really underwhelming in its current state and I cannot in good faith give it an upvote. Would love to see this rewritten.
I think for a rewrite there should also be 2 more versions of Level 16, one being a rocky landscape, and the other being a volcano.
Great premise, you got me hooked there. But you just need to give it more substance. You had a good train rolling but you stopped it before it reached its destination (my vault-tight cranium). Lengthen, rework, conclude.