Entity 139 - "The Puppeteer" / Discussion

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Has potential

Kai4C 16 Jun 2021 16:09

This is a pretty good start. The character herself is pretty interesting, I was hoping to hear how she speaks and all a bit more clearly.It’s a real shame there aren’t any interview logs, I was anticipating one :/

Hope this gets updated with more stuff in future!

Re: Has potential

GrandTemplarVigilant 19 Oct 2021 21:06

Yo, to answer about the interview logs, I was gonna have one originally but then decided to cut it for multiple reasons. I do have a tale including her in progress that I’m gonna finish up, among other things, once I get a break from schoolwork if you’re interested.

Hello! Small critique

Taxifrog 28 Apr 2023 14:46

Hello, I have small critique about your entity article, it has interesting and creative character concepts however it lacks certain important details on these characters. For instance, what type of puppets does the girl use? While we know they are silk, we are not told if they are string puppets, hand puppets, sock puppets, ventriloquist dummies or etc.
In my opinion this is an important detail since much of the understanding of this character and how it would interact with its surroundings is tied to the nature of their puppets, as an example, how she uses her puppet’s hands. When this is left to the imagination of the reader it can lead to misinterpretations of the nature of this entity, one example could be if the reader infers that the puppets have weak arms and fingers that are not visibly capable of manipulation by a human puppeteer ( such as a ragdoll/dummy hand puppet ) this implies that the girl’s dexterity and “hand” strength would be rather low due to the weak build and limp disposition of her puppet’s hands/arms.
I would like to respectfully request take you please take the time to carefully consider how your entities interact with their environment physically, and add this on to your article.
Some helpful information and details could include

• How do they speak / what is their disposition? ( are they childish, spiteful, innocent, intelligent, animalistic? )
• What about them is anomalous, and what is tangible? ( What are the puppet’s vital points, do they have vital points? Do they die, or just stay alive mangled and torn until the girl decides they want them to die? Can the puppets speak, if so how do they speak and is it through anomalous means such as telepathy? How can the girl be harmed if she can be harmed in some way? )
• What is the relationship between your entities? ( are the puppet’s physically apart of the girls body once attached? Do the puppets die once removed? Do the puppets have true free will or do they follow the girl’s orders without any resistance? Can the girl turn more than just wanderer’s into puppets? )
• What is your entity’s motivations and purpose? ( Why does the girl act violently? )
• How human are your entities? ( Do the puppets retain their identity/memories/personalities after being transformed and do they keep their same motivations? Does the girl feel complex emotions or empathy? Is the girl a complex person or are they more similar to something mindless that just follows specific rules?

Thank you for reading

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PenOrSaber1 27 Nov 2023 14:34

Can't wait to see this rewrite! Good luck!

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Don’t like it

Zeno man 02 Jul 2024 03:01

I’m tried of entities that are just normal people and don’t do all that