Level 140 / Discussion

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-1, here's why

i like computer 21 Apr 2021 18:11

I don't like this level, and i'm giving it a downvote, here's why:

Things I Dislike

It's generic. Like, there is just nothing to it. It's just a desert with a house, woods, and entities. Nothing really cool about it.

Along with this, the entities and properties are just so… well, out there. Like why are they there? Can you go into detail? Do they have a reason to exist? I don't get it. This is with the entities too, but it's not as bad. But basically, here is what I got

• If it doesn't serve any purpose other than the level is to generic for a greenlight, make it interesting enough to make people think it has a reason. Or what you should do, actually give it a reason.
• Give detail. Seriously, give interesting details that intrigue the reader.
• Make it interesting. Don't just say "Oh there is this hill and blah blah" because I was bored throughout the entire thing.

Things I Like

I like the properties. Now I know your probably thinking "Oh didn't you just say the properties are bad??", which yes, I did say that. But I like the properties itself, but I don't like how its being used and the environment it's in. All you gotta do here is expand. Maybe even make a log about it? Add something, because that was the only semi interesting thing.

Overall, you could do better. I like the building blocks, just add more to it.

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Robert J. Quack

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Mecheye 07 Aug 2023 03:12

This is good! Surreal and empty. Well done!

+1

Oort 2 22 Mar 2024 16:22

I like the surreal feeling I got reading this. The images are a great + are they AI generated?