When a work is on-site, you are not entitled to give critique in the first place.
What does this even mean? Why am I not 'entitled' to give critique to a page that's on-site? Being on-site does not guarantee that the work is perfect. I'm very puzzled about this sentence.
when stars smile at the moon / wonder how it looks in your eyes
just dialing your number / failed to press the last two - PRAYING IN MY HEART:
when the moon reaches stars / if you hold me tight
feel your heart beat so close - WOULD THIS LAST LONG?…