This is a comment left in the discussion section of your page. I will now give you criticism, which can be helpful to you. However, I noticed that you have made a grammar error. This will cause me to tell you to get better at this, and I will not elaborate any further.
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Howdy!
This was written with the intended joke in mind of "new author who didn't grammar or spell check." That is why many grammar errors are present, alongside boring story and etc. The whole thing is meant to be taken as a joke, hence the -J.
Hope that clarifies for you!
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I was making a joke with the whole stating the obvious thing.
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As you should.
i'd probably make ALL of the same mistakes made in this article if i were to write a backrooms entity.
This a comment explaining why the user named TheBoxOfFun appreciated and upvoted the entry
The article itself isn't only a joke post but also an actual goddamn meta guide on what to not do in an article. This is so goddamn brilliant. (+1)
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This is a post stating that PenOrSaber1 will now provide feedback that is of absolutely no use to the author, and then spam the thread when no one responds.
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Just a high schooler who thinks he is good at writing. Likes working on a lot of stuff, ranging from writing for the Backrooms Wiki, to providing critique, and reading. ~ Pen.
"The truth is the truth. What changes is what we know about it and what we're willing to believe."
- Jonathan Maberry, Rot and Ruin
Being serious though, this article's overall summary matches that of actual entities on this site, not naming any(*cough cough* Entity 99 before it went under rewrite. *cough cough*) names.
Just a high schooler who thinks he is good at writing. Likes working on a lot of stuff, ranging from writing for the Backrooms Wiki, to providing critique, and reading. ~ Pen.
"The truth is the truth. What changes is what we know about it and what we're willing to believe."
- Jonathan Maberry, Rot and Ruin
Very similar to SCP-1234-J, but this page uses the concept in a funnier way. I enjoy the meta aspect of this article but its a little on the nose at times.
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